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franny50
Member since February 24, 2011
Member for 15 years, 3 months
Fantasy Man
Fantasy Man
Simple gestures that make me smile
His caring touch to last awhile
A man of honor to admire
Not a cad or a common liar
A humble soul who is kind
Of kindred thoughts: we're of one mind
Whose laughter makes me want to dance
In him, I 'll always take a chance
Whose very presence make others stare
His movements like a gentle bear
At home,he loves to cook and sing
In him I’ve found my everything
franny50’s timeline
- February 2026
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24 TueAnniversary
15 years of membership
- February 2021
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24 WedAnniversary
10 years of membership
- February 2016
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24 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- June 2015
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20 SatReceived a critique
on Fantasy Man from @Sparrow
"Your style is fine and I see that it is your normal way of writing. Now we can get down to finding our feet not metric lol. There are many that can help you on the poetry trail, though I am just here, ask if needed for…" - February 2012
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24 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2011
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12 Sat
- February 2011
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24 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- July 2010
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11 SunReceived a critique
on The Night Descends from @scribbler
"First of your poetry I've come across.A very nice work.Read through it 3-4 times and each time seems to need one more syllable in last line.hope no offense taken.....scribbler" -
11 SunReceived a critique
on The Night Descends from @xena465
"So very nice to see you again dear friend, and what a wonderful write. You just keep coming back better and better. Xena Rosina x Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell" -
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- June 2010
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08 TueReceived a critique
on From Sorrow To Acceptance from @loved
"....always free one has to find time to read me gr8888888888 poem urs" - May 2010
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05 WedReceived a critique
on Give Me A Kiss from @loved
"when i like a poem i visit it again and again and so i come for one once again a kiss is all that i miss in life this" - April 2010
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05 MonCritiqued
"The Human Spirit" by @xena465
"What a balanced heartfelt picture you paint of dealing with your feelings.It flows as well as your rhyming poetry!" - March 2010
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29 MonReceived a critique
on From Sorrow To Acceptance from @lyz
"Well written and best wishes to you. XX" -
25 ThuReceived a critique
on Give Me A Kiss from @judyanne
"i just love it. no games, lovely franny lol judy" -
25 ThuReceived a critique
on Give Me A Kiss from @chumfin
"its indeed a great pleasure to be reading your piece, this one is surely a good one from a pro. permit me to be your fan chumfin" -
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22 MonCritiqued
"The Golden Feeling" by @docmaverick
"A lovely poem I can relate to.The rhythm is also very good!" -
22 MonCritiqued
"A empty House is not A home" by @Skybones777
"I agree with Jayne-Chloe.The content is there.The rhythm and flow is a bit inconsistant,however,you portray your feelings about home poigantly and vividly!" -
22 MonCritiqued
"A buffalo in chains" by @U K Atiyodi
"you made the image of the buffalo come alive!Very well written poem!" -
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15 MonHighest posting month
March 2010 — 5 poems
- January 2010
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24 SunFirst critique offered
on "ASH MAGIC" by @Nordic cloud
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- December 2009
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19 Sat
- July 2009
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01 WedFirst publication
From Sorrow To Acceptance
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01 Wed
About Me
I have been published in independent print anthologies,including;"Reflections On A Blue Planet"series,"On The Words Of Love,"A Poet's Way Of Being","A Haiku Treasury", "Winter".Published by Brian Wrixon. "The Attic","The Art Of Darkness", "Landscape Of The Dream"."The Poetic Bond 2",and in"The Gift Of A Rose",and "The Black Rose Of Winter" both by Lost Tower Publications.Some of my poems also appear in the literary quarterly FM(five volumes) Online,my work is featured in Carty's Journal.Angie's Diary,Outsider Writers,The Original Van Gogh's Ear,and in Cygnus.I have also edited a number of ebook anthologies all available on bookrix.Recently(May 2014)I have been published in "Bridge Of Fates",by Lost Tower Publications.My essay entitled,"A Lifetime In New York",will be featured in the Summer edition of FM.
Favorite Quotes
Do you not see how necessary a world of pains and troubles is to school an intelligence and make it a soul?-John Keats
Out of the sighs a little comes, But not of grief, for I have knocked down that Before the agony; the spirit grows, Forgets, and cries; A little comes, is tasted and found good. -Dylan Thomas
"Courage!" he said, and pointed toward the land, "This mounting wave will roll us shoreward soon." In the afternoon they came unto a land In which it seemed always afternoon. -Alfred Lord Tennyson
The thought of our past years in me doth breed Perpetual benediction: not indeed For that which is most worthy to be blest— Delight and liberty, the simple creed Of Childhood, whether busy or at rest, With new-fledged hope still fluttering in his breast .-William Wordsworth
Location: NYC
Keats
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