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franny50
franny50
Jul 11, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Night Descends

As The Night Descends As the night draws the curtain closeAnd all of earth lays down it’s headThe moon and shadows strike a poseAs our little ones are tucked in bed Ethereal beings take to flightAs heavens’ curtain slowly fallsThey pass unseen through out the nightTo undertake their sacred calls To guard frail humans in their sleepBringing hope to weary soulsFrom house to house,they quickly leapTo carry out heavens’goals    


— franny50, Jul 11, 2010

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Country/Region: NYC

Favorite Poets: Keats, Donne, Wordworth, Longfellow

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xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Hiya Franny

So very nice to see you again dear friend, and what a wonderful write. You just keep coming back better and better. Xena Rosina x Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

night

First of your poetry I've come across.A very nice work.Read through it 3-4 times and each time seems to need one more syllable in last line.hope no offense taken.....scribbler
franny50

franny50

15 years 11 months ago

Thanks Xena!I am mostly on

Thanks Xena!I am mostly on facebook,but will post new poems on this site as I write them.Hope all is well! And I take no offense scribbler.I will probably revise it soon.I have quite a few other poems on this site.Please go to my page and give me your opinion.