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seabhac
seabhac
Mar 22, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A loud

  Allowed into my lifeAllowed into my bodyAccepted and lovedGrowth and awakeningThrough sharingHesitation understoodAnd now?The cruel slashingOf Alexander’s swordCutting awayCutting outDeafening stillnessThe wound of silence More deadly than limbs severedYou attempt to sever soulIn the silent storm
— seabhac, Mar 22, 2010

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R.M.Shanmugam

16 years 2 months ago

i have appreciation for the

i have appreciation for the style of your writings. contents well thought of.
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Lyz

This feels like raw pain ... it made me wince in the reading but its a fantastic write ... damn woman you just get better and better in my humble opinion nothing to suggest love and hugs JayCee x x x
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 2 months ago

Ah dear Seren

As always astute. Raw enough to bleed the heart through tears. Sadly he had nothing to suggest either Seabhac
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ziggy

16 years 2 months ago

hi

raw and wort reading indeed i can`t see it needing anything else my fav line is " the wound of silence " which says it all cheers good stuf ,,,,,,,ziggy
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

Beautiful

Lovely creativity loved by all
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lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Liz

Yes, pain in your words. Great write and I hope some of that pain has alleviated. You deserve to smile each day. Love and warm wishes. Lyz. XX