Give Me A Kiss

Surprise me in the morning

With a kiss upon my lips

Gently wisper loves’sweet song

As I embrace your manly hips

With earnest thought,give me time

To show you what you mean to me

In thoughts and dreams,so overcome

With love and lust for all to see

I miss your smile when you’re gone

And the way you look at me

Your funny laugh I can recall

A patient man for all to see

Come lets share our hopes and dreams

And laugh at all lifes mysteries

Life holds little time for schemes

Instead we’ll build our history

— franny50, Mar 20, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: NYC

Favorite Poets: Keats, Donne, Wordworth, Longfellow

Critiques

magics02

16 years 2 months ago

I enjoyed this one alot

Franny I really liked this poem and love the picture of you and your boy. A New York girl too I see. I was born in Connecticut and have been to New York also but not in a long time. Will be back to visit again nice lady. Magics02

franny50

16 years 2 months ago

Hi magic.I am glad you

Hi magic.I am glad you enjoyed my poem.That young man in the picture is actually my nephew Shaun.I have no children.

franny50

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks ephraim!I will take

Thanks ephraim!I will take your suggestion.

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

I love the ryhme and flow.

I love the ryhme and flow. It reads so easily and it's very caring towards your man...Great stuff Franny. Rosina xena465

Nordic cloud

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Franny

Ann of Norway A real fine rhythm here and a charming content too. Love Ann. "I miss your smile when you’re gone" I would prefer-you are? And it fits in the rhyme for me.

franny50

16 years 2 months ago