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From Sorrow To Acceptance
From Sorrow to Acceptance -By Frances Ayers
On sorrows'wings I journeyed to a land where I had never been.
Each loss was undiscovered country,landscapes I had never seen,mountains I had never climbed.
I had taken a journey past familiar landmarks I missed, and memories that were past.I had buried the familiar stories and neglected the happiness,which lay buried deep beneath the earth,only now and then pushing to the surface.
I drank from bitter springs and sat among the weeds,neglecting to seperate them from the flowers.
Beheld only the sunsetting but forgot the beauty in each new day.
When I had shed enough tears,I remembered the laughter echoing in the valley and heard the birds chirping a new song.
I saw the sun reflecting on the water.
and instead of weeds,I saw flowers. Where there were empty patches of dirt,I saw seedlings and the possibility of new beginnings.
Critiques
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Nicely told story beautifully succint Franny
franny50
16 years 2 months ago
Thank You Annie.I felt this
Bonitaj
16 years 2 months ago
I saw seedlings...
franny50
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks!
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
This is lovely Franny.
franny50
16 years 2 months ago
The Rhymers Club is at a bit
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Missed you
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Franny
loved
16 years ago
TIME IS