faerybeki

Member since February 24, 2009

Member for 17 years, 3 months

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Two Little Words

Posted Oct 17, 2013 · 18 lines · 4 critiques

This poem
called on me
today.

Only two words
came
to ask if I would
like to
play,

Let
Love...

Yes, just
Let
and
Love...

Your heart
can write the rest.

I'm too busy
dancing.

faerybeki’s timeline

February 2024
23 Fri

Anniversary
15 years of membership
February 2019
23 Sat

Anniversary
10 years of membership
February 2014
23 Sun

Anniversary
5 years of membership
October 2013
19 Sat

Received a critique
on Two Little Words from @Roscoe Lane
"Don't dance to long, as i'll miss your words so wise. Love Roscoe..."
18 Fri

Received a critique
on Two Little Words from @Geezer
"to see you again! And such a great poetic-thought! Nothing more is needed. ~ Gee"
18 Fri

Received a critique
on Two Little Words from @Eduardo Cruz
"I like the simplicity of this and how you structure it, it carries the reader to the end in a smooth embraced dance. Very, very good write. Two little words, that are so huge! Eddie"
17 Thu

Received a critique
on Two Little Words from @Ian.T
"Lovely to see you again back to two Moonrakers now again. But only two little words from you, "Let Love" mind you they are lovely words and can be added to many things. Great to have you return we have missed you, Yours…"
17 Thu

Posted a poem
Two Little Words
"This poem"
Open thread 18 lines
February 2013
23 Sat

Received a critique
on You need to kiss more... from @loved
"I need to be kissed no, none does me give this bliss…. I yearn more for a kiss than some joker commenting on this my missing of a kiss … I hope soon someone will send a pack too… no, not of cigarettes but of kisses as I…"
21 Thu

Received a critique
on You need to kiss more... from @Frenchf
"I heard of a girl who married a tree And she is as happy as happy can be The tree doesnt cheat, doesnt lie doesnt flirt The tree is as solid and steady as oak The tree is as faithful as trees can be Yes you are right we…"
19 Tue

Received a critique
on You need to kiss more... from @Esker
""A bright red trick" I remember a poem from long ago describing apples some poets are more natural and they turn and bury their talents to provide for the wealthy and being of their family this is a wealthy for me that…"
19 Tue

Received a critique
on You need to kiss more... from @judyanne
"beautiful imagery - especially 'The moon smiles, leans through the cloud and kisses the apple tree' nothing to offer i really enjoyed this - made me feel all warm and fuzzy :) love judy xxx ."
19 Tue

Posted a poem
You need to kiss more...
"It's getting dark,"
Open thread 16 lines
November 2012
13 Tue

New follower
@Seren
May 2012
18 Fri

Posted a poem
Packing Prayer
"Come Beloved"
Open thread 27 lines
April 2012
26 Thu

Posted a poem
On Learning of Your Death
"I cried"
Open thread 75 lines
March 2012
24 Sat

Posted a poem
Second Anniversary
"Celebration"
Open thread 12 lines
20 Tue

New follower
@Cloudthings
19 Mon

Posted a poem
Reassurances for an Ex-Arachnophobic
"Just"
Open thread 16 lines
19 Mon

Critiqued
"Listening with the soul" by @Cloudthings
"you'll have to forgive me for my lack of constructive feedback! it's just that reading your writing is like having tea and scones with your soul, an always intense, emotional and enjoyable experience :))) I find it near…"
18 Sun

Critiqued
"Listening with the soul" by @Cloudthings
"oh my... what a wonderul surprise to find you here :)))) I love you in all your beautiful rawness and my ears and heart are blown wide open xxx"
18 Sun

Critique milestone
1,000 critiques given
17 Sat

Critiqued
"why everything turns green" by @Kailashana2
"Sometimes I am so filled with love for it all.... that words are unnecesary ;) good to read you Anna xxxx"
17 Sat

Posted a poem
The Fog
"There are times"
Open thread 20 lines
September 2011
27 Tue

Posting milestone
100 poems posted
27 Tue

Posted a poem
New Direction
"Above the road"
Open thread 3 lines
04 Sun

Critiqued
"Everything counts" by @weirdelf
"Gee, can I just say how much I like this 'rewrite'? well I do, much love Beki xxx"
04 Sun

Critiqued
"Everything counts" by @weirdelf
"I totally agree with Blistered Pen's interpretation of this one, you've made your point, yes, but you can write better poetry than this, much love Beki xxx"
04 Sun

Posted a poem
Death Wish
"Bury me"
Open thread 3 lines
August 2011
26 Fri

Critiqued
"the politics of never learning Swahili" by @Kailashana2
"A woman of strawberries :) gosh I love that image, thank you Anna for that and the rest of this poem. Who would any of us be without the exploration down that river? :) much love Beki xxx"
26 Fri

Posted a poem
Sunset
"Eight-thirty pm,"
Open thread 3 lines
14 Sun

Posted a poem
Heaven is Now Here
"Here"
Open thread 38 lines
07 Sun

Critiqued
"for Sam" by @Kailashana2
"thank you Anna for saying that which I could not, much love Beki xxx"
07 Sun

Critiqued
"An uncertain voice .... alone" by @Roscoe Lane
"I like this I do lol :) Like Dalton can't help but think of Yoda :) and agree although I like the idea it does make for a disjointed read. much love Beki xxx"
07 Sun

Posted a poem
One sided Conversation with an Atheist
"Nothing"
Open thread 24 lines
November 2010
26 Fri

New follower
@loved
February 2010
23 Tue

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2009
30 Tue

Most-discussed work
You carry..Your poetry (We all do, I know)

38 critiques to date.
April 2009
15 Wed

Highest posting month
April 2009 — 16 poems
February 2009
27 Fri

First critique offered
on "Alive again" by @Kyarain
24 Tue

First publication
Violent Subtleties
23 Mon

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.