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Mar 24, 2012
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Second Anniversary
Celebration
Of
Two years
Two hearts
One
Name
Coming
Of
Two
Together
Oneness
Nirvana
About This Poem
Last Few Words: a couple of acrostics, written for my husband, in celebration of our wedding anniversary :)
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Nordic cloud
14 years 1 month ago
A sweet memory dropping down
A sweet memory dropping down the page like a lovely little water colour painting.
Nordic cloud.
|faerybeki
13 years 12 months ago
a sweet memory indeed dear
a sweet memory indeed dear Ann, I like what you wrote about a 'lovely little watercolour' :) I hope there will be a large collection of these Anniversary acrostics to help us both remember, much love to you xxx
Roscoe Lane
13 years 12 months ago
Nice thoughts,
Nice thoughts well written, hope you have many more years in nirvana. Regards Roscoe..
judyanne
13 years 12 months ago
how clever beki
to use cotton
nice acrostics
happy anniversary for whenever it was
may you stay in your nirvana for forever xx
love judy
Ian.T
13 years 12 months ago
Beki
Lovely way to hold those two years wrapped up with Cotton.
Take care of you, Young Moonraker,
Yours in Exile, Ian.T