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Soldier of Love

She's a soldier of love.
She gives and she's bruised, she gives and she's battered,
the whole world could shatter and she would still live
to love on..

She's a soldier of love.
She gives and she's broken, she gives and she's taken
to the gravest of places but she will still live
to love on...

She's a soldier of love.
She gives and she's kicked, she gives and she is stripped 'til
she bares us her soul, it's her lesson for us all,
that though it may be hard, we all must still live
to love on...
— faerybeki, Mar 03, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

What is that

It cannot be love to suffer so, the write is a true picture of what some have to go through, It was only a few years ago that I was told of a Mother being so cruel to her daughter that it passed all understanding, and affected the girl for ever. A good thing to write of, but there must also be a bit that alows the soldier of love an escape route. In this country I know there are escape routes for such persons, in all abuse situations. But as we know it is like a whirlpool you need the energy to do something to get out. Anyway I digress as usual, great write and great point to bring to others notice, Yours Ian.T
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 3 months ago

Thanks Ian for your comment

Thanks Ian for your comment and your read! I think her escape route is love itself and the fact she is still capable of it, the sense that whatever may happen we can keep going and keep loving!! :) take care b x
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paparazii

17 years 3 months ago

nyc piece

It's agreat flow i should say, yes of course what Yenti had said is true, love is the source of all that breathe without it, we can not do--?
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 3 months ago

Hello!

if love is, then love is air, it's everywhere and no, we cannot breathe without it!! :) Thanks for reading and commenting and for your excellent chat!! take care b xx
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NEW ERA

17 years 3 months ago

my thoughts

I think it stands as a poem, has a nice flow as a song. Of course the title fits becasue of the repeat in the poem. Love Cathy
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 3 months ago

Thanks Cathy for your

Thanks Cathy for your thoughts and for reading, much appreciated! Sometimes when i write something that seems to be lyrics i'm never sure if it will stand up as a poem, so glad to know you think it does! Take care b x
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 1 month ago

You are a great soldier...

Of love and of poetry, whereby in the moral order, we find satisfaction in the realization of the dream of love and in the intellectual order, it is in the realization in the dream of poetry. In this piece, the poet gives love and she is battered,taken to gravest places and stripped, but she still lives to love. Well written and well thought out. Bravo, our soldier of love. T.
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 1 month ago

Thanks T, it’s so nice to

Thanks T, it's so nice to see you here :) never thought of myself as a soldier of poetry (got to be a poem there!) thanks for that image and your comment. much love b xx
Tonya

Tonya

17 years 1 month ago

A true heart of

passion and one of boundless grace. I don't know if i have seen many people, if any that can always see the silver lining and continue to take abuse. A very noble ideology and one we should try to strive for. (Not the abuse, but the silver lining) Even if it means moving on to another place and not giving up on hope. But continue to share our love and compassion with others. and not lose our faith in humanity as a whole. There are a lot of really good peoples out there! Well written, food for thought. The poem flows right on track, good message to hang in there. (kind of like moonmans last post "off center", here, she is certainly not putting herself there.... hmmm...) Sometimes tho, you do have to take care of yourself... loved it. Always Sincere, Tonya
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 1 month ago

Thanks Tonya, glad you liked

Thanks Tonya, glad you liked the poem, and you are right about the importance of taking care of oneself, (more important to me now I'm a mum) and that there are good peoples out there :) I'm finding more of you every day! much love b x
Rett

Rett

17 years 1 month ago

Beki

Lovely write. Very good message. I have met those over the years that came from loving homes, some were loving people, some weren't. Others that had a rough time that were mean spirited and others that were truly compassionate. I think it depends on the strength and inner resolve and goodness inherent in them. Very good flow and I actually like the repeat as it hammers it home. "to love on." Respectfully, Rett: Hug a logger, you'll never go back to trees! For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 1 month ago

Thanks Rett for reading and

Thanks Rett for reading and taking time to comment, glad you liked the poem. It warms me that you appreciate the sentiment of the poem, 'to love on' and it does take strength and resolve, you're right, for me being loving is the only way I feel right in the world. much love b x Ps. Are you a logger? can I send you an electronic hug? lol :)
Rett

Rett

17 years 1 month ago

*LOL* not a logger

I'm a retired chemical industry tech, but I love that saying. Saw it on a bumper sticker on a loggers pickup truck from Oklahoma. I thought to myself. Oh boy, that will make the tree-huggers mad. *LOL* Thanks for the hug though! Respectfully, Rett: Hug a logger, you'll never go back to trees! For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905