Bosscombat

Member since March 24, 2009

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Telekinetic Torment

Posted Jan 4, 2015 · 14 lines · 2 critiques

With a click off thumb and middle,
Skin Separates from skin,
Suspended in space and time,
Equal sections, spread equal distance.
There are radiant green shards of light and energy,
Echoing and surging through the gaping hollows.
Atoms divide and become rival.
Chromosomes sever and revolt.
The human fabric is exposed and scrutinised.
...euphoria.
Then with blunt, undisguised melody,
Another thunderous snap,
And the peices jolt back into slumped composition,
And all that remains is agony.

Bosscombat’s timeline

March 2024
23 Sat

Anniversary
15 years of membership
March 2019
23 Sat

Anniversary
10 years of membership
January 2015
13 Tue

Received a critique
on Telekinetic Torment from @judyanne
"I'm intrigued I interpret this as that opening of the soul when one meditates to near understanding, and that jolt back into the now because the mind find it too vast to grasp, with the resulting disappointment and feel…"
05 Mon

Received a critique
on Telekinetic Torment from @Esker
"like this descript....and i see how the use of puncturation makes the read more fall into its pace.. thinking of the movie The Howling and the surf sixties song No werewolves.... thank you"
04 Sun

Critiqued
"THE LIVING DEAD" by @Geremia
"Bring on the apocolypse I say! Good job!"
04 Sun

Critiqued
"Oh! Those First Glorious Days Of Conquest" by @brittle light
"I'm a fan. It's amazing to think a flag can be more powerful than 100s of years of culture and tradition."
04 Sun

Critiqued
"a version of life" by @lovedly
"Great poem. 'Nuff said."
04 Sun

Posted a poem
Telekinetic Torment
"With a click off thumb and middle,"
Open thread 14 lines
04 Sun

Critiqued
"MIDNIGHT PLOW" by @Esker
"Nice."
03 Sat

Received a critique
on Complex Texture from @Esker
"beer an coolaid with a bucket of chicken hyenas at least with wings one can wing off with morsels or this could be the news at night.. my peanut butter and jam gotta fuel up in case something comes up at night. drop the…"
03 Sat

Received a critique
on Complex Texture from @themoonman
"Read this one out loud, everybody ... thanks for posting and wowing my afternoon, good to see ya, Richard"
03 Sat

Received a critique
on Complex Texture from @wesley snow
"It caught my attention. Sad to see this as your only post over so many years. I hope you post again."
03 Sat

Posted a poem
Complex Texture
"I hear the sound of crumbling bone"
Open thread 9 lines
March 2014
23 Sun

Anniversary
5 years of membership
January 2011
13 Thu

Critiqued
"Visions in Alchemy " by @Seren1
"hmmm im pretty sure this is one of the saddest ones...and im not entirely sure why. awesome though jayknee.. in true seren form. love ya sister! xox"
13 Thu

Received a critique
on Ahhh, Villains. *sigh* from @themoonman
"good to see you man ... I too like it when the villain prevails, can't help it, in most stories or movies they do not. Have you seen the movie "Rampage"? If not, do check it out when you see it advertised ... What would…"
11 Tue

Received a critique
on She's divine and prospers (while she divides and conquers) from @Kailashana2
"Boss, I read this the first time yesterday and now have your poem several times. Faced with utter devastation of who you thought you were (with her in your life) I can only offer a cyberhug. And tell you that her stab i…"
10 Mon

Received a critique
on She's divine and prospers (while she divides and conquers) from @Esker
"really got into this poem Boss liked the flow the roll the punchs and the pull ive watched the happy many and the trophy wives the ultra out there see the scars of the bad and heavy sorry to hear about that but this poe…"
10 Mon

Critiqued
"hidden in hands that never opened" by @Kailashana2
"...i didnt see boredom or ecstacy. only sadness. "you like an old lover visiting your grave with stolen flowers" ...was the best part for me."
09 Sun

Critiqued
"Broken Pieces " by @Seren1
":,( thank you."
July 2010
10 Sat

Critiqued
"Bound within the Grace of Bethany " by @Seren
"♣a gorgeous poem for our baby girl i would die for her your words have rung true once again absolutely love it love hubby and dad snake xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox"
April 2010
15 Thu

Posted a poem
Music soothes...
"Each day I wake up"
Open thread 28 lines
13 Tue

Posted a poem
Deprivation, hallucination
"Ahhh, daybreak again!"
Open thread 46 lines
March 2010
23 Tue

Anniversary
One year of membership
January 2010
26 Tue

Posted a poem
Brando Jenkins Allowishus
"I see him there,"
Open thread 23 lines
20 Wed

Posted a poem
The Torment of Mankind
"Theres one thing on this planet"
Open thread 35 lines
02 Sat

Posted a poem
Aide to a Flailing Memory
"In particular calligraphy,"
Open thread 23 lines
December 2009
24 Thu

Posted a poem
The Bile Bites
"As strange as it may be"
Open thread 81 lines
19 Sat

Posted a poem
Set in black Ink
"I have written an entire book of poetry"
Open thread 20 lines
08 Tue

Posted a poem
Heed thy warning lest ye die
""Inhale"
Open thread 32 lines
November 2009
25 Wed

Posted a poem
Mind Over Manipulation
"I've been thinking in circles"
Open thread 46 lines
October 2009
30 Fri

Posted a poem
More Than Skin Deep
"There’s a pimple on my chest"
Open thread 28 lines
April 2009
15 Wed

Highest posting month
April 2009 — 14 poems
11 Sat

Most-discussed work
Writers block

22 critiques to date.
March 2009
26 Thu

First critique offered
on "One Moment" by @Seren
24 Tue

First publication
A Poker Face
23 Mon

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.