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More Than Skin Deep

There’s a pimple on my chest

I wonder how long it’s been there

It’s not even ready to pop yet

Or even big enough for me to care

I might give him a name though

And watch the boy evolve

Keep him warm and covered up

Protect him from the cold

Arnold? John? George? Or Jerry

I think Jerry pimple is probably best

After all he is a festering mound of pus

An infection none the less

He’s looking red and swollen

Though hidden by a mess of hair

Should I squeeze the sucker real tight?

Or pretend he’s not even there?

Nah! I couldn’t kill him just yet

He’s only young it wouldn’t be quite right

I’ll furnish myself with a shirt

And wait ‘till Jerry’s head turns white

Hmm…eh! I’ll burst him now

Before he can subside

I give his shoulders a squeeze

And *splat* out rush all my insides

Argh, I knew I should have waited

Now I’m inside out

This is much more inconvenient

Oh yes! much much more, without a doubt.

— Bosscombat, Oct 30, 2009

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CyberSpace

16 years 7 months ago

*Big Smile*

Fucking cool pimple man LOL shit fucked up love ya brother
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

PMSL

Only you would name a pimple Matty ya fucking nutter (huggles) I needed a laugh tonight thanks for supplying it lmfao (huggles) and love Jayne x x x
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

Like Jaughter said: PMSL

Like Jaughter said: PMSL ...and you are wayyyyyyy over the top when you squeeze your own head. Smile. Hugs, Anna "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
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SLS

16 years 7 months ago

An ancient Chinese story

An ancient Chinese story tells of a scholar long afflicted by a monstruous pimple from which a dragon burst and ascended to heaven. Yours met an ambiguous end, you are turned inside out, were you Jerry, unknowingly?
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

No inside no outside. What

No inside no outside. What to do what to do? So, on occasion I write Haiku. a pimple named fred was relieved from being red and now he's dead. poor chap. ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

What a card u are

Trust you to come up with something so gross and turn it into entertainment. Well done on this pimply write, lol. Love Lyz. XX