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The Bile Bites

As strange as it may be Even with the scourge of the vile and ill-tempered Rifling through my stomach, Feasting and Sharpening their teeth ...and bloodied horns on my insides. I have found strength to... offer myself Some may say as a pawn in service to others To those of whom I strongly find undeserving Of the demons that haunt them. And so even as the bile bites at the top of my throat I tender a pale hand, palm up as intended fingers curled and jagged from stiffened joints. "Join my hand and we both shall brave the abyss" I say. Although due to the scourge that infects my being She is quite reluctant to accept For fear that HER demons may feast May reproduce. Become bigger, stronger, more agile Lest they become ...more fierce upon adjoining mine. her reluctance although possible to be rooted within realms of truth Proves to me... to be unfounded. what of those underlying demons The Pain, the loneliness, the fear Those that provide basis and strength for all those that toil above... Could they not all be ...relieved via assaulting the deficient domains that hastened their initial birth? Is it not the truth that if you destroy the limbs of a giant he can no longer stand tall nor continue to reek havoc? I rest self-assured that she will soon realize. Realize that all her storms shall be cast silent Unless there's something there to meet them I am there, a man although lost in shadow Scarred and bruised, hurting and tired I am there, yet also in search of remedies to heal a demonized soul, my flesh and bone.
— Bosscombat, Dec 24, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

matty do you want me to

matty do you want me to reformat for you huni? ... its middle of the night and I can if you like ... love you darlin MERRY CHRISTMASSSSSSSSSS WOOOOOT :) LOVE AND HUGS JAYNE X X X X X
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 5 months ago

Bile Bites...

I don't always get the author's intent, sometimes I am quite obtuse. But I feel that your meaning comes through in this work. It seems to me that you are ready to do battle with any demons that get in the way of salvation. What that salvation is... I have no idea, but great work! ~ Geezer ~ P.S. My poem, done tonight, chose it's own format too!
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Strong and Powerful

Yes, a bit of formatting may give this the justice it deserves but I found it an interesting from the heart a strong write and read. I am glad that you have written this piece. I now see you have refilled the quill. Well done, Boss and by the way, love the art. A man with many talents. Be proud. Have a great New Year Mate. Love Lyz. XX