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Set in black Ink

I have written an entire book of poetry
That will probably never reach the light of day,
Its full of useless sentiment, remorse
And words that have gone astray

I shall keep this book under lock and key
Until the day I draw my last breathe
And someone who cares will sit next to me
And will read the pages on which I've wept

For there is something melancholy
Something intrepid between its covers
It will pronounce its fruitless teachings
And passions in vivid colours.

And in my last earthly moments
I will run a finger through their hair
Softly grasp their sweaty hands
Close my eyes and whisper "I cared."

Then they'll turn the final page
Where written in black pen
Rest the only words that mean a thing
A fearless and bold "The End."
— Bosscombat, Dec 19, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dearest Matty

I really loved the theme of this one Matty, its so hard commenting when your here lol ... and we didnt mind you using the puter :) its all good darlin love and hugs Jayne :)
KF

Korcy Fifthrig

16 years 5 months ago

The end

Only recently have I myself started writing from a worn, mangled folder stored twenty some years. You captured my own feeling but much better than I could ever hope to anytime soon. Excellent. With envy, Korcy
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Bosscombat

16 years 5 months ago

hey korcy

Thanks for your comment and stars Much apprieciated! Im sure ur old book has a plethora of good stuff mate. Schlauncher! ♣
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ziggy

16 years 5 months ago

hi there

this makes a good read and reminds me of one of my own "seeking" glad i caught this piece nice write here , the last line , A fearless and bold "the end " good line but the "a" to me might sound better being left out just a thought chat soon ziggy ,,,,,,,,,,,,happy xmas
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Bosscombat

16 years 5 months ago

heya ziggy

Cheers for the input man Ill have to check out some of your work ♣
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

This breaks my heart, Boss.

This breaks my heart, Boss. I can't stand endings. They always end with tears. ~A Don’t let your victories go to your head, or your failures go to your heart.
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Bosscombat

16 years 5 months ago

:)

All things come to an end at some point. We may as well embrace it. Celebrate it at least. Cheers for the comment :) ♣
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mirky62

16 years 5 months ago

Set IN BLACK INK

mirky62 I suspect ,from my first read of your poetry, that you have many significant passages to put forward to the world.
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Bosscombat

16 years 5 months ago

hey mirky

As it stands... not really Just a bunch of self loathing jive and me trying to be comical But thanks anyways Glad u enjoyed your first read of my stuff. :) ♣
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dearest Matty

Little brother you shine so beautifully in the light of SPOTLIGHT love you Jayne x x x
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Bosscombat

16 years 5 months ago

haha jaynee 2 bums

Well I don't do very well in the sun so spotlight is refreshing lol and I cant get burnt ♣
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 5 months ago

As great...

A work as I have read from you. You have captured a universal thought. [I think] Great job! ~ Gee
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Bosscombat

16 years 5 months ago

heya brosef

Cheers my man Glad you like it! Oh something I should tell u. I just farted and it smells kind of like xmas ham. Tasty. ♣
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Pmsl at your comment to

Pmsl at your comment to Snake ... Just getting clothes ready for the funeral in the morning and I wanted to say when we posted this last night ... I knew in my gut it was different from your others ... cant put my finger on it but yeah ... loved that end line brilliantly done darlin love you JayKnee 2 bums
JW

Jimmi Dylan Whitlam

16 years 5 months ago

brosef

Brother, this poem is inspiring, intriguing and for lack of description Amazing. However most importantly i have more understanding of you as a poet and a person. See you soon legend. Much love.
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Damo

16 years 5 months ago

Loooove this! The truth of

Loooove this! The truth of it - in it! It's kinda self-depricating and pragmatic all at once... the second last stanza is the poo...totally resonate with that (as a culmination - of course).
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orgami

16 years 4 months ago

now that I write in Cyberness

I always used my old poems to start the woodstove and wait for the motor in the old IBM to warn up before tapping away with the damp paper kind of miss going over the stacks of heavy old papers full of font I relate to the ending of course having followed the talented and tortured who wrote brilliant songs and works before falling away like a wishing star should something happen to me Im unsure yet what to do maybe delete my works as some artists do like the Viking funerals only I dont own a boat or woman or much else and some new teachings say to me that God is a higher order to keep me out of the ego interesting thoughts your poem makes me ponder Thank You Boss! Steven