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Aide to a Flailing Memory

In particular calligraphy,

Free from smudges and set petite.

Rest names, places and memories.

The book of the concluding days.

The yellowed and frail pages,

Entrusted

With tales of the decades.

The names mostly monikers of the deceased

And those who have led meandering pathways.

The years chained in the past

Have obscured existence… Forever.

I pledged not to forget you.

I've held you out of harm's way

In my flailing memory.

I want to remember everything

Prior to an expanse obscuring a backward glance,

So stifling the clamor of distraction,

I write your name

In particular calligraphy,

Free from smudges and set petite

Although far from deceased

You are someone

That I cannot let myself forget.


— Bosscombat, Jan 02, 2010

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Geezer

Geezer

16 years 5 months ago

Flailing Memories...

I failed to see the flailing memory until too late. It wailed close to my ear, and flayed my mind with the flailing arms of loss. Sorry, I just couldn't resist. I think you meant Failing Memory. Of course if a memory failed it might flail around trying to regain itself. No matter how it was meant, it works! Great read ! ~ Gee
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

What a wonderfully

What a wonderfully passionate write attesting to someone's *unforgettableness*. Makes me think of Nat King Cole and that's a good thing. I very much like your poetry, Boss. ~Anna
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CyberSpace

16 years 5 months ago

Bro this is brilliant is it

Bro this is brilliant is it about anyone or no one? love you brother Snake
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 5 months ago

YAH...Flailing is the right turn of phrase

It's flailing, flopping about like a gasping fish on dry land, trying desperately to find a way to not forget as the aide slowly yellows with time and distance. Real good. The images of slow accretion of memories building up over time are wonderful. I get a strong sense of a still point in time where in the midst of all the layers of swirling recorded past everything is focused on one concentrated instant of recording that particular person. Very strong, very good. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race