andrew

Member since December 4, 2006

Member for 19 years, 6 months

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test poem referencing old contest

Posted Jan 16, 2026 · 1 lines

test test

andrew’s timeline

May 2026
10 Sun

Critiqued
"Preperation of a Magic Spell" by @Candlewitch
"Thank you for the report - this is now fixed."
January 2026
16 Fri

Posted a poem
test poem referencing old contest
"test test"
Open thread 1 lines
August 2025
08 Fri

Critiqued
"test" by @test2
"test comment"
June 2025
05 Thu

New follower
@poetaldo
April 2024
12 Fri

New follower
@mark
December 2023
12 Tue

Received a critique
on Poetry is back from @Lavender
"Humongous grin reading AI's critique! I'm glad the site is back - sure missed it. Thanks, L"
11 Mon

Posted a poem
Poetry is back
"Write, write, write!"
Open thread 2 lines
May 2023
28 Sun

Critiqued
"Their Prey" by @Tigger Kaz
"Title: The title "Their Prey" effectively captures the essence of the poem, as it conveys the idea of power dynamics and exploitation. It sets the tone for the poem and prepares the reader for the subject matter. Langua…"
April 2023
02 Sun

Received a critique
on Test poem 1 from @andrew+test76
"Test!"
March 2023
27 Mon

Critiqued
"Perfect Teen Girl" by @Shelby Pryor
"To clarify, my comment was that the Neopoet AI feature in this case obviously missed the mark. When I read this response, I immediately put through an update to the AI feature so something like this is less likely to ha…"
26 Sun

Critiqued
"Perfect Teen Girl" by @Shelby Pryor
"This obviously missed the mark!"
26 Sun

Critiqued
"What About the Others?" by @Ekaterina Alexandrovna Sherbatskaya
"We will build an opt out feature for you. Most feedback has been positive."
18 Sat

Received a critique
on diesel breathing (from January 2007) from @swamp-witch
"I have just started learning about the possibilities and concerns with AI for writing and education. I have also been thinking a lot about how proofreading tools, grammarly, spell check, things like that, are evolving a…"
18 Sat

Critiqued
"Dear Self" by @paul
"As an experiment, we are using a leading large language model (in other words, AI) to provide critiques of poems that were posted recently. Please let us know what you think. Computer critique: "Dear Self" is a free ver…"
18 Sat

Critiqued
"Life with no meaning" by @Jakub Zoltowski
"As an experiment, we are using a leading large language model (in other words, AI) to provide critiques of poems that were posted recently. Please let us know what you think. Computer critique: "Life with no meaning" is…"
05 Sun

Received a critique
on diesel breathing (from January 2007) from @Triskelion
"is...... I think I'll write a limerick. Thomas"
04 Sat

Received a critique
on diesel breathing (from January 2007) from @Geezer
"an appraisal by a human poet. I found that the so-called disconnect between the poets' thoughts about his car, a woman and the periods of time, to be a symptom of a person with a troubled mind. Whether it be because of…"
03 Fri

New follower
@Candlewitch
03 Fri

Posted a poem
diesel breathing (from January 2007)
"i found a red light that turned to green"
Open thread 62 lines
November 2022
04 Fri

Posted a poem
Test poem 1
"test"
Open thread 1 lines
December 2021
03 Fri

Anniversary
15 years of membership
February 2020
22 Sat

New follower
@Hannah Moonlark
October 2018
14 Sun

Received a critique
on Test 3 from @scribbler
"I know most poets like condensation of meaning but come on.........lol"
14 Sun

Received a critique
on Test 3 from @scribbler
"I know most poets like condensation of meaning but come on.........lol"
14 Sun

Posted a poem
Test 3
"Testing"
Open thread 1 lines
June 2018
27 Wed

Received a critique
on Test poem 2 from @scribbler
"To err is human to really mess up requires computers. Thanks for your endless toil in keeping site up and running......stan"
27 Wed

Posted a poem
Test poem 2
"Now it works"
Open thread 2 lines
December 2016
03 Sat

Anniversary
10 years of membership
October 2016
12 Wed

Posted a poem
test - POEMS ARE BACK
"Neopoet"
Open thread 4 lines
December 2011
26 Mon

Posted a poem
test 1

Open thread
03 Sat

Anniversary
5 years of membership
February 2010
21 Sun

Posted a poem
test
"test "
Open thread 1 lines
21 Sun

Posted a poem
test
"test "
Open thread 1 lines
21 Sun

Added to bookshelf
Test
"Test (2009)"
March 2009
22 Sun

Posted a poem
15 West
"key smoothly turns,"
Open thread 85 lines
November 2008
21 Fri

Posted a poem
test
"test"
Open thread 1 lines
December 2007
03 Mon

Anniversary
One year of membership
September 2007
07 Fri

Added to bookshelf
The Tay Bridge Disaster
"William McGonagall (1880) http://www.mcgonagall-online.org.uk/poems/pgdisaster.htm Beautiful Railway Bridge of the Silv'ry"
July 2007
15 Sun

Highest posting month
July 2007 — 7 poems
January 2007
04 Thu

Most-discussed work
diesel breathing

17 critiques to date.
December 2006
20 Wed

First critique offered
on "The night Santa had to wear waders." by @dbaker
03 Sun

First publication
Test Poem
03 Sun

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.