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You lie

While she listened with the forced pretense of being naive

Even though she was pathetically transparent

You run away

While she pretended not to care

She hurts inside even more

Though you never knew

Don't worry about the mess that you made

She sits in the smouldering remains of the fortress that she once built

Someone will clean up this tragic aisle after you

 

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Le Shaun J. Alexis

19 years 1 month ago

No,I have not been abused,

No,I have not been abused, in fact the complete opposite, I'm daddy's little girl and what do you know about me? I'm always fresh and original, baby.
Mark

Mark

19 years 1 month ago

creative

yes this is what I think here Shaun. Have seen a lot of beat me up throw me away - YOU HURT ME, poems but this is certainly one of the more creative I have read - thanks