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poetaldo
Member since May 17, 2025
Member for 1 year
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The reason I am here is because of you
The reason I am here is because of you
You created me
In your image and
I am grateful for that
Yes I live a good life
I have nothing to bitch
About my life
Yes the winter is killing me slowly
I hate to go out in the winter
But I have no choice
Because walking is good for me
I don't like the short days
That we have in the winter
It gets dark at 5:00 PM
Every single day
Good night my God
poetaldo’s timeline
- May 2026
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22 FriReceived a critique
on For as long as I live from @Geezer
"like prayers from a diary, think more elusively, let your mind describe the way the sand feels on your feet, the way that the air smells, like lemon trees or rose blossoms, use the senses that the "Father" has given you…" -
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21 ThuReceived a critique
on Sweet the rain fall from @RJ Bear
"A brilliant depiction of sensory overload and eventual peace. The water feels like a total reset from the oppressive heat and the weight of the crowd's stares. Beautifully structured as a full loop of a day. Beautifully…" -
21 ThuReceived a critique
on Help help help from @RJ Bear
"Good read . I could feel the urgency. Regards Ray" -
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17 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
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13 WedNew follower
@paul
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- April 2026
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13 MonReceived a critique
on it is convenient from @Geezer
"to the storyline. I was confused at the progress of the story. I can understand the use of the title of "It is convenient" If I were to look it up in the dictionary, or online, I might use it that way too. I think you n…" - February 2026
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25 WedNew follower
@Shantie Moyo
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20 FriReceived a critique
on I by God from @Jane A. Rug
"as a skeptic in the hands of an angry god, i try not to blaspheme what might pass as questionable material, but growing up unitarian (and occasionally attend the Thomas Paine Fellowship in Collegeville, Pennsylvania) to…" -
20 FriReceived a critique
on I by God from @Jane A. Rug
"as a skeptic in the hands of an angry god, i try not to blaspheme what might pass as questionable material, but growing up unitarian (and occasionally attend the Thomas Paine Fellowship in Collegeville, Pennsylvania) to…" -
17 TueReceived a critique
on Every heart beat from @Geezer
"A prayer that I certainly can live with. ~ Geezer. ." -
16 MonReceived a critique
on Time to say goodbye to the night from @Geezer
"The clock ticks away the hours 'till dawn, the dark is ended now. A sun-filled morning has started, shining into my room. My eyes are pried open with sunbeams, and focused on the clock. 5:30 am! Summertime mornings are…" -
05 ThuNew follower
@ritam
- January 2026
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17 SatNew follower
@Micah Stone
- December 2025
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19 FriPosting milestone
100 poems posted
- November 2025
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17 MonCritiqued
"Totalitariarian Nation!" by @Leslie
"I believe you did A fine job Writing your poem Please continue writing More poems" -
17 MonFirst critique offered
on "Totalitariarian Nation!" by @Leslie
- June 2025
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15 SunHighest posting month
June 2025 — 22 poems
- May 2025
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17 SatFirst publication
Anger
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17 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Aldo Gabbay Kraas
Was born in Brazil
July 15th 1968
When he was a teenager
He emigrated from Brazil
To Toronto Canada
In January 2011 he self published 3 chapbooks
Fado, home, and Faces
In 2024 aldo published his 4th chapbook
Aldo's Canada
That chapbook he dedicated
To his older brother
Claudio Gabbay kraas
In 1980 Aldo Gabbay Kraas traveled to
Europe
While in Europe
He visited France, Germany, Poland, and
Vienna
Location: Ontario
Favorite Poets
Pablo Neruda
Patrick Friesen
Michael ondatje
Recent Work
Many years ago
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For as long as I live
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Holy holy holy
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Wishful thinking
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One men also cries
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You say I am perfect
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