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NatalieMBallestero
Jan 27, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

My Undoing

My soul aches when I think of you. My soul cries when I touch you. My soul shutters when I hear the sound of you. My soul melts when I taste you. My soul loses it’s control around you. You are my undoing.

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Cathy

19 years 2 months ago

Very Nice

Wow.. Very real and very nice.. Thank you very much.. Real feeling in there..

 

Cathy

Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 3 months ago

Yep I like too

very ture to life and sad That we can all be undone, when first we allow ourself to be bound or to reach out too nice little read Donnie/Sinbad