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I sat in an open field
Pen and paper in hand,
Waiting for raw inspiration to strike.
I looked around me,where I was perched
On a little hillock of dirt,grass and wild flowers
And I thought,what if this was once a short,burly man
Who died a horrible death,a murder most foul,
A struggle in this field,in the still of the night.
The only witness was the moon,he was left there to suffer.
I wondered if he said anything at all
If he had the strength to,of course.
What if all he did was gasp as the life escaped his body
A mere whisper,not even deserving an echo
To announce to the underworld of his coming.
No one to mourn him or remember his name.
What if he was a selfish man and the only good thing he ever did
Was die in order to sustain life on this mound.
I sat there in that open field imagining all this on that hump
Overgrown with luscious,green grass and forget-me-nots.
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Le Shaun J. Alexis
19 years 2 months ago
POEM
Thanks dawg! I appreciate your comment very much.
Le Shaun J. Alexis
19 years 2 months ago
RE:
Oh you are so kind...lol!But please we might keep up like this whole day you giving me compliments and I saying thank you.So, no, thank you...lol.