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Feb 17, 2010
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The scarlet swimming costume
A transformation
Satin curving cupping pear
a whizz and blur of scarlett through ice
alabaster arms cut waves
dark hair trailing smoke
whale limbs turn shark
clown fish scatter
shells tumble sand grains storm
she is a torpedo
whirlwind creating saunmi
chopping ocean splitting it half
kali meets mudusa
water sizzles and frothes spit
into the eyes of passers by
one length turns ten,
twenty strokes forty
pale tiles come back focus
chrorine pants echo, noisy pool
that costume sure feels good
Satin curving cupping pear
a whizz and blur of scarlett through ice
alabaster arms cut waves
dark hair trailing smoke
whale limbs turn shark
clown fish scatter
shells tumble sand grains storm
she is a torpedo
whirlwind creating saunmi
chopping ocean splitting it half
kali meets mudusa
water sizzles and frothes spit
into the eyes of passers by
one length turns ten,
twenty strokes forty
pale tiles come back focus
chrorine pants echo, noisy pool
that costume sure feels good
Comments
Roscoe Lane
16 years 2 months ago
Love swimming
Lunegirl
16 years 2 months ago
I love swimming to, but
Stefan
16 years 2 months ago
hi
Lunegirl
16 years 2 months ago
someone told me to dig deep
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Yes I like the flow of this
Lunegirl
16 years 2 months ago
This is a different style of