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Mar 01, 2007
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High
I lie there on the grass on my back,sun bright
What a pretty beauty sky
The colours are nice and pretty beauty
See that there's a faint rainbow
A cloud in the shape of hands open,waiting to receive
Ants crawling on my legs
My nose running,head floating and twirling in a kaleidoscope of giddy happiness
My limbs paralyzed and a silly smile on my lips
And I'm thinking, well isn't this grand.
God is trying to tell me something and I'm below tripping because I'm high.
Comments
Le Shaun J. Alexis
19 years 2 months ago
I'm sorry,I'm not familiar
I'm sorry,I'm not familiar with alot of Beatles songs.I'm not from that era.I suppose I'll have to alot more Beatles songs so I'll be original and I'll know not what to write.