night_writer71

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to my dearest consort

Posted Jul 17, 2011 · 11 lines · 1 critiques

My dearest consort
I have been finding myself more with in the rain.
I can only hold fast and wait for the days of sunshine once again for me here.
Setting and wondering of what tomorrow holds for me. but even the light of day has past.
Grim days flock to my side like snow flakes in the cold winter.

I guess holding a broken heart and a shattered life as of days past once again.
Why for so many times must life repeat as a dream of horror entwined into my very blood line.
Will I ever find the life that I so long for. The one last rainbow filled with colors of heaven.

Will it be in the last nights of time.
Will I fall from grace its self as I crawl closer to the edge of nothingness.
With only a heart filled with despise and hatred for what I have always wanted.

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Critiqued
"Sex After LIFE What Imagination" by @loved
"good message."
September 2011
08 Thu

Critiqued
"LAST SUMMER WALK" by @scribbler
"i read the poem a few times and then a few more. i like the setting and time. all together brings happiness. the wine making was great. it also gave a feeling of lose but still held the blance hope too."
July 2011
17 Sun

Received a critique
on to my dearest consort from @raj
"this write does express the forlorn grim mood ..i am sure it will be more expressive once you tweak up this first draft.. for example "chilly winter" could be more expressive.. similarly you could consider "will it be m…"
17 Sun

Posted a poem
to my dearest consort
"My dearest consort"
Open thread 11 lines
08 Fri

Received a critique
on spring from @weirdelf
"spring is most visible i day time. yellow eyes imply something demonic lustter is not aword. Did you mean lustre or lust? Could be something if you clarified your ideas and imagery."
08 Fri

Received a critique
on spring from @Barbara Writes
"i like this deep poem, I notice a misspelling in one word" loveing or loving""
07 Thu

Posted a poem
spring
"forth within a hand filled as of blind hope."
Open thread 7 lines
June 2011
11 Sat

Anniversary
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July 2010
12 Mon

Critiqued
"Vulnerable" by @RobeccaJane Lee-Murchison
"thats a good worded poem and pulls meaning from both light and dark of ones feelings. nice write..for me more of the showing feelings of dark. would bring more of a ballance."
07 Wed

Received a critique
on i have no name for this one. from @Candlewitch
"I agree with Roscoe, Stan and Xena. This piece filled me with loneliness and wistful feelings. I love it, all of it. I have a few suggestions of my own: Use capital letters at the start of a new sentence and change lowe…"
07 Wed

Received a critique
on i have no name for this one. from @xena465
"I agree with Roscoe and Stan. This has very deep meaning and with a little tweak it would be even more wonderful. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell"
07 Wed

Received a critique
on i have no name for this one. from @scribbler
"I kept rereading this in attempt to find out why it affected me so deeply and was unable to put my finger on it.Only change I would make would be to change 2 thy's to me and my.Shouldn't cop out on title as often title…"
07 Wed

Received a critique
on last tears of light from @loved
"...at night as i do i was always told i am best at my poems as a night owl so i call myself a rattish owl nite or not day is just about the same i love poetry even in dreams I compose the best of the ones i can claim Th…"
07 Wed

Received a critique
on i have no name for this one. from @Roscoe Lane
"thats what i would call it, your poem is good, but with work could be better. Example... Blow for me wind, and set me on top of a wintry peak. Only in a place of white never ending, will i find rest everlasting. Incased…"
07 Wed

Posted a poem
i have no name for this one.
"   in a grain of sand i have won."
Open thread 7 lines
June 2010
20 Sun

Critiqued
"Revolving Door" by @xena465
"[some times the a great begaining is shadowed by seemly the end]that was told to me. i 'll pass it on to you. xena i will hold prays and hope for you and your family. that is a very heart touching writing."
16 Wed

Posted a poem
last tears of light
"                                last tears of light"
Open thread 11 lines
16 Wed

Critiqued
"The Spider Weaves a Star" by @Shula
"i injoied the writeing. the dark and light really brings the mentality to deepth."
14 Mon

Posted a poem
please hurt me
"    "
Open thread 17 lines
12 Sat

Critiqued
"Black Rose" by @Restlesslittlesoul
"i like how the words conveys the feeling of a rose."
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broken letter
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broken letter
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Open thread 15 lines
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"LAST SUMMER WALK" by @scribbler

on to my dearest consort from @raj

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"Vulnerable" by @RobeccaJane Lee-Murchison

on i have no name for this one. from @Candlewitch

on i have no name for this one. from @xena465

on i have no name for this one. from @scribbler

on last tears of light from @loved

on i have no name for this one. from @Roscoe Lane

"Revolving Door" by @xena465

"The Spider Weaves a Star" by @Shula

"Black Rose" by @Restlesslittlesoul

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