Shula

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The Spider Weaves a Star

The Spider weaves a star And I in early morning mist Percieve it Jewelled by dew drops Moon touched She spins her universe Mimics the silver stars And rests. Each silken thread is centered To that time When night stars dissolve Into the dawns new day. But here below The tiny spider weaves for us Among the darkened Hedge A Miracle. And we are privilaged to see Her web star shimmer In the early sun.

— Shula, Jun 02, 2010

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Seren

16 years ago

Dear Shula

How beautiful I am near to speechless this is one of the best writes I have read in an age I only have one suggestion The Spider weaves a star And I in early morning mist Percieve it Jewelled by dew drops Moon touched She spins her universe Mimics the silver stars And rests. Each silken thread is centered To that time When night stars dissolve Into the dawns new day. But here below The tiny spider weaves for us Among the darkened Hedge A Miracle. And we are privilaged to see Her web star shimmer In the early sun. bravo ... I loved your poem I believe if you broke the lines down like this ? it is much more reader friendly kind regards Jayne-Chloe ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Shula

16 years ago

The Spider-----

Dear Jayne-Chloe, Thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry,I have taken on board your advice I am delighted to have found this site it will stimulate my mind and hopefully bring more poetry into being. Sheila ( Quote In the will of man there is a power of longing which turns the mist in ourselves into sun.)Kahlil Kilbran.

Shula

16 years ago

The spider Weaves a Star

Thank You so much for your comment on my poetry,I found this site while looking for people who share the same love of words as myself. I needed something more than I have at present and friendships that are forged by poetry will mean so much to me. Sheila (WISDOM IS NOT IN WORDS, WISDOM IS MEANING WITHIN WORDS) Quote by Kahlil Kilbran.

xena465

16 years ago

Welcome to Neo Shula

With the new format that Jayne suggested it would give this great write its true value. Xena

Shula

16 years ago

The Spider Weaves a Star

Thank You Xena I am delighted to have found this site and appreciate your comments,I have taken on board Jaynes suggestion and agree totaly. I am sure you will all inspire me to write more often. Sheila

iverhyck

16 years ago

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Just lovely, Shula. Really enjoyed it. I want you to look at these pictures http://fotki.yandex.ru/users/ekirilkin/view/265355/?page=0 http://fotki.yandex.ru/users/ekirilkin/view/262158/?page=0 http://fotki.yandex.ru/users/ekirilkin/view/266397/?page=0 Sure you'll like them. Konstantin.

Shula

16 years ago

Pictures

Thank you so much for sending me the photographs they are a stimulus for me I am moved by images and I hope to get some good poetry out of looking at them. Would you mind if I did that? Also can you tell me the language that is used,I would like to read it in English. I loved them Konstantin Sheila (Shula)

iverhyck

16 years ago

Welcome

You're welcome. It was my pleasure, and I'll be glad if you write some new poems to describe these pictures. I'm from Russia, and the pictures are from our most popular site Yandex. Of course I'm ready to translate into English. 1. Для милых дам - To nice dames. 2. На молекулярном уровне - On the molecular level. 3. Гирлянда - A garland. Konstantin.

Shula

16 years ago

Re Pictures

Konstantin How wonderful Russia is somewhere I always wished to visit,however it is too late for me now I cannot fly anymore. I will get some poetry written in response to youir pictures it will take me a while but I'll get there. Sheila

Rich-The-Poet

15 years 12 months ago

Great read and write my

Great read and write my friend,.thank you for your shares,.,.Rich

night_writer71

15 years 11 months ago

i injoied the writeing. the

i injoied the writeing. the dark and light really brings the mentality to deepth.

sammysew

15 years 11 months ago

hey there,I’m really new

hey there, I'm really new to this wonderful site too. Just love this piece and agree with the others about the format as is wasn't until I read it a second time did I see the real beauty in your words. Fantastic title too. Well done and I can't wait to see more of your work. Sammy x