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please hurt me


    
please hurt me i must have ask
please hurt me i must had begged
please hurt me even more
please hurt me befor you go
please hurt me time after time
please hurt me day after day
please hurt me year after year
please hurt me till i feel no more
please hurt me untill i have no heart or soul
please hurt me till i am just hole
please hurt me when i have nowhere to go
please hurt me by now do i have to say
please hurt me now i don't have to ask
please hurt me undoubtly i wrote it in stone









 
 




— night_writer71, Jun 14, 2010

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Shula

15 years 12 months ago

Please Hurt Me

I was really touched by the sadness in this poem ,I really hope your life is fuller now.