broken letter

I love this. It's a great sincere write and full of deep feelings, but may I suggest to structure it more like a poem so that’s it’s easier to read as one…. My dearest consort I have been finding myself more with in the rain. I can only hold fast and wait for the days of sunshine once again for me here. Setting and wondering of what tomorrow holds for me. but even the light of day has past. Grim days flock to my side like snow flakes in the cold winter. I guess holding a broken heart and a shattered life as of days past once again. Why for so many times must life repeat as a dream of horror entwined into my very blood line. Will I ever find the life that I so long for. The one last rainbow filled with colors of heaven. Will it be in the last nights of time. Will I fall from grace its self as I crawl closer to the edge of nothingness. With only a heart filled with hatred for life. ------------- Something like this.....just a suggestion and just want to help. Xena

I loved this poem,I agree with Xena that it could be written in a different form,but Your heart was in it and you will find you r grief will pass,think of the new friends you have made on this site,I only found Neopoet about ten days ago and already I have been made welcome. Shula