last tears of light

Very nice write. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

...at night as i do i was always told i am best at my poems as a night owl so i call myself a rattish owl nite or not day is just about the same i love poetry even in dreams I compose the best of the ones i can claim Thank you all for your lovely moral support I live on your shoulders as you read over mine and I love to thank each one individually hope you don’t mind I am unable to render such attention I wonder is time a limitation I shall try to solve my miscalculation till then abide with me I am a loner come ride with me

really liked last two lines.welcome to site!I've only been here a little over a month but have found many friends who have been only too glad to help.Almost all my stuff is western classic, so I feel I am unqualified to offer much help on other forms other than whether I like it.Occasionally I may comment on structure.Appreciate being added to buddy list as one can't have too many of these.Looking forward to future submissions and will offer my limited help if wanted........scribbler

I love the title of this poem and can feel your lonliness,one can feel alone which is where writing is so uplifting I am a solitary person too,although I live in a household of four people because we don't all share the same feeling for words I have to move away into my delegated space to write. I can see where you have several blips but I am loathe to correct I don,t know how you feel about that. This is a great site so many friendships forged through poetry wonderful. Shula