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night_writer71
Jun 16, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

last tears of light


                                last tears of light

 colors of clear seen, only in the darkest light.
for one that falls from nowhere but only to set at deaths side.

winds of no movement cast cold chills.
heat brought from the breath of life. 

for the sands drain away slowly by each pass
of the lesser light.  which brings found and
lost.

long comeing the last tears of light.
shared by two which a pure end for
one passed.



— night_writer71, Jun 16, 2010

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xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Night_writer

Very nice write. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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loved

15 years 11 months ago

do u write and did u not read my comments

...at night as i do i was always told i am best at my poems as a night owl so i call myself a rattish owl nite or not day is just about the same i love poetry even in dreams I compose the best of the ones i can claim Thank you all for your lovely moral support I live on your shoulders as you read over mine and I love to thank each one individually hope you don’t mind I am unable to render such attention I wonder is time a limitation I shall try to solve my miscalculation till then abide with me I am a loner come ride with me
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

light

really liked last two lines.welcome to site!I've only been here a little over a month but have found many friends who have been only too glad to help.Almost all my stuff is western classic, so I feel I am unqualified to offer much help on other forms other than whether I like it.Occasionally I may comment on structure.Appreciate being added to buddy list as one can't have too many of these.Looking forward to future submissions and will offer my limited help if wanted........scribbler
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Shula

15 years 11 months ago

Last Tears of light

I love the title of this poem and can feel your lonliness,one can feel alone which is where writing is so uplifting I am a solitary person too,although I live in a household of four people because we don't all share the same feeling for words I have to move away into my delegated space to write. I can see where you have several blips but I am loathe to correct I don,t know how you feel about that. This is a great site so many friendships forged through poetry wonderful. Shula