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mona
Member since July 6, 2009
Member for 16 years, 10 months
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The poor new newspaper said
Oh yah
now I can paint the rain
And people will believe me
The richest one said
Oh no
And I can invent people who would support your news
So what do you think?
The poor newspaper said
Cool
Let us play with nuts and dumb heads
The richest news said oh no
Don’t say that
But say
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Let us wash some empty minds
and drive the intelligent ones to madness
but
think of how much money we can make
pitting the madness against the void
mona’s timeline
- April 2026
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29 WedNew follower
@mona
- July 2024
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05 FriAnniversary
15 years of membership
- July 2019
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05 FriAnniversary
10 years of membership
- July 2014
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05 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- October 2013
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26 SatReceived a critique
on Master's degree in frozen hearts (edit) from @Dalton
"I don't see it as anti-men. To me this poem speaks about how a person can crush within another person the very idea or belief in true romantic love. Maybe the world does that well enough on its own or maybe it takes tha…" -
24 ThuReceived a critique
on Our Love Story is Tones Travelling Through Space from @Rula
"Welcome back. Hope you're safe and your family. I am happy to meet an Arab friend here. I am looking for your new writings." - March 2012
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05 MonNew follower
@Willy
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03 Sat
- February 2012
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12 SunReceived a critique
on CIVIL CRAP from @Kailashana2
"Barry and I just watched her in the Cleveland City Clubs, repeat showing on PBS. I ordered the tape for our MEPF. Amaney A. Jamal Associate Professor of Politics, Princeton University Click Here to Purchase CD or DVD ht…" -
10 FriReceived a critique
on CIVIL CRAP from @Esker
"Nice comp on this! I enjoyed this as Im listening to punk music Like Jesus and the Mary Chain and Black Tambourine and My Bloody Valentine... To read this is like dark coffee and walking through the freezing snow exhila…" -
10 Fri
- September 2011
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13 TueCritiqued
"Vampires of Oil, our friend attacked" by @weirdelf
"I have been in the dark side of the world ( in the middle of a very dirty war =directed by western bloody evils=== just for oil.... the picture will explain more= (1) http://www.google.com.ly/search?q=bombing+hospitals+…" - April 2011
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28 ThuReceived a critique
on Master's degree in frozen hearts (edit) from @loved
"Neither you nor I will meet one day Only if you would read me Through my eyes But you can’t How could I call you my .... beloved? his LOSS I ASSURE YOU YOU ARE THE BELOVED NOT HE I WISH THIS U KNEW MEN ALWAYS THINK WITH…" - March 2011
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02 WedCritiqued
"P.The." by @amalzamani
"I prefer to write shopping list rather than writing A list and call it a poem Poetry is talent and challenge to me and any one can list analogy even my 10 years old sister" -
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02 WedCritiqued
"P.The." by @amalzamani
"No connection, Thats a poem and this seems to me like an ordinary analogy words in a list. sorry my dear. http://new.neopoet.com/node/2614" -
02 Wed
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02 WedCritiqued
"i do not implore you" by @Kailashana2
"Proud, but the good sort of pride, esteem, unbroken." - February 2011
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28 MonReceived a critique
on CIVIL CRAP from @hobo
"everything is different depending on where you are. I think only the people who are there really know what is going on. nice work" -
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18 FriNew follower
@chumfin
- January 2011
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- December 2010
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- November 2010
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26 FriNew follower
@loved
- July 2010
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11 Sun
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05 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2010
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- May 2010
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- July 2009
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06 Mon
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06 MonFirst publication
A falling star (since unpublished)
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05 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Live the moment and enjoy your life
life is short,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,(O Allah
Do not take my soul in a state of impurity and disbelieve).,
Location: LBY
Favorite Poets
Some Arab poets
my love once
.....Dear friends too
Recent Work
Free( حرة)
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She Was
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Losing a Friend
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Translated Arabic Poems
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DESPISE ME NOT
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love is not a sin
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A Lesson In Drawing
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I Have No Power
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