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Willy
Member since April 12, 2011
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Days like that......
Like its one of those days; it’s one of those things;
All mean the same to you:
There is an unseen weight yet still so real
weighing down upon you dampening your spirit
stifling your growth
It’s like you are suspended in mid-air; you are in stasis
With some strange being at your rudder;
You are at its mercy: turned, spun, rolled, rotated, pulled, pushed
your activities are futile but all you feel like doing is nothing
your environment have become this barren
desolate place devoid of its thrills, its hypnotism or even its magnetism.
If only you could be whisked away…..far away
Where your slate could be wiped clean and start afresh!
your once faithful survival strategy – the will to live; the means
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of livening up yourself – is busting at the seams
your broad shoulders ready to buckle under the
the weight of the heavy heart you tote
you have vision yourself on this skyscraper high tightrope
mid-way of its mile long span frozen with fright
you have become so timid that you could
die with shock if touched
days like that….is like it’s one of those days….it’s like one of those things
which instead of being measured by despair
you clean yourself
you anoint yourself
you attire yourself…………..clean and dry
you cast away your gloomy and screwed face
by which time the sure the sun will be shining
days like that…
its’ one of those days…it’s one of those things!
That your bottle comes under test
You know have a good chance to become to know
what metal you’re made up of on days like that!
Willy’s timeline
- April 2026
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12 SunAnniversary
15 years of membership
- April 2021
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12 MonAnniversary
10 years of membership
- April 2016
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12 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- April 2012
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12 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2012
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28 WedReceived a critique
on Days like that...... from @weirdelf
"Who do you want to get something from it? It's just an attack, a rant. Think about why you write and for who. This can be considered in form and structure, not just content." -
27 TueReceived a critique
on Days like that...... from @China Blue
"firstly it is difficult to read in the format that you use, which tends the reader to overlook many of the words 2nd it's like is used way to often you did not indicate at what intensity you wanted your poem critiqued…" -
27 Tue
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21 WedReceived a critique
on Mama's Cry from @Nordic cloud
"Christina Dodwell " In Papua New Guinea." Language: Story of the crucifixion: Ol i nail im Jesus long kros, im, i die, na ol plant im bodi daun bilo long groun, e die, tasol un i no die finis, bye i kum up wan taim moa…" -
19 Mon
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17 Sat
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15 ThuHighest posting month
March 2012 — 5 poems
- April 2011
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14 ThuFirst publication
Creature of the Night
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14 Thu
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14 ThuFirst critique offered
on "Drug Addiction" (since unpublished) by @xena465
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12 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 2 days later.
About Me
Location: GBR
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Days like that......
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Creature of the Night
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