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— louis, Sep 12, 2007

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Arthur Tugman

18 years 6 months ago

Arthur Tugman

Hi Lewis, I have to test this site out too. I am only one day old here. Enjoyed your brief comments. Trust no one but have faith in everyone.
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moonlilly

18 years 4 months ago

Just wishing a warm wlecome

Just wishing a warm wlecome to the new beings ( I am new as well) in the group. So have you placed a poem yet? To be honest, I am well sort of scared to I have not ever allowed anyone read my thoughts thus far. HOw about You?
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Chocolate Sistah

17 years 1 month ago

Welcoming you into the fold

Hey, Just wanted to say hello and welcome to neopoet. I am brand new myself but jumped in with both feet by writing a poem entitled "Cut to the Quick". I hope you have a chance to view it just like I would like to view your work. Feel free to write me back. Can't have too many "friends", right? Chao for now!
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Vovo

17 years ago

Hey

Thanks, for the warm welcome. I also don't have much of friends myself. And I am learning my way around the Neopoet. I just came across the neopoet when I was just browsing. Maybe you can help me out , how does the neopoet work? I am a young writter, though i don't have any of my staff published. Well, hope think and believe you will help me out know about the Neopoet. Thankx
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Ammus

16 years 3 months ago

Hi

ammus Hi Loius, Iam new to this site... I am expecting comments on my work so that I can improve on my work.I havent written much.Just given a try a few times but didnt stick to it much.
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U K Atiyodi

16 years ago

To Ammus

Write one poem a day. You will become a great poet. Best wishes
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southern_voice15

18 years 7 months ago

T.E.S.T.

Tell Everyone Something True
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

17 years 7 months ago

T.E.S.T.

The test is simple, I take each and every person serious. Be it today tomorrow or the next.
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Conect11

18 years 7 months ago

test

text emulates standard type
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 7 months ago

a one...a two..a three...

Take your number two pencil everywhere you never know when somebody will test your talent as a poet. Thanks everybody stay tuned.
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

17 years 6 months ago

The number

Test me if you have the mind. It makes no difference my friend. As I will be a poet from dark till dawn. Steven A. Kacer
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Stace..x

18 years 4 months ago

T.E.S.T

Take . Every . Shiny . Thing.. and keep it in a box.. ..x..
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Samuel Johnnie Green

17 years 9 months ago

T.E.S.T

Since this is my first time up here, I want to know if this site's legit, unlike Poetry.com, which is rumored to have scams. See you around Louis. 1
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

17 years 7 months ago

Words

I write from the cuff. No my friend no I say. Just as I am a man me. So as the truth is me. I will always be just. The truth the picture. The reason of my time. Perhaps not a soul me. So walk down the road. Remember why you came. As in truth to change. Steven A. Kacer.
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test

17 years 6 months ago

test123

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test

17 years 6 months ago

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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

17 years 6 months ago

Test.

Understand. One is for the lady Two is for the fool Three is just for me. Steven A. Kacer
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pillowCASE

16 years 5 months ago

HI AM SYDNEY

POETRY MAKES 1 TO GET IN TOUCH WITH THE INNRE PERSON TI MAKES U GLOW, GROW IN A THOT IT CROWNS U WIT IT"S EXCITMENT..POETRY HAS GIVEN ME A CHANCE TO DO BETA...AM SYDNEY FROM PRETORIA AND CURRENTLY WRITTING A POETIC NOVEL THAT AM STRUGGLING TO FINISH..DO YUO WRITE? IF U DO HELP ME ..WAS TAKE WITH U JST SAID THAT POETRY IS EVERYWHERE...0730488236 IF WANA HELP
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 5 months ago

SYDNEY

PillowCASE. Hello poet, I think the missplaced words were done for a reason. I friend think no poets words are a joke. As to the novel you are to say that you write. I say good luck as a person that findes this place to be a place of truth. I think a joke placed to poets is a untruth. Yet just me thinking so by chance wrong to you. If you need help I will play the game I'm a sucker that way. My @ mail is [email protected]. I love the written word and well expect it to play in the mind of my truth for a day. Steven A. Kacer
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Zampano

17 years 6 months ago

test

Enjoyed your poem louis; in it's entirety.
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spider

17 years 5 months ago

test

test text test text...
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DWD

17 years 2 months ago

test II B , 4 text 2 c , B a Q-T

test 11 22 33 test tube The test is read between the lines (II) Between the lines where we sketch where we fetch ripest words of the vines To challenge our creative edge Fine line to walk Find the words to talk A start and finish to match Butterfly kisses in dreams Walking on rainbow beams Warmth of love With wings of a dove or the coldness of screams Falling apart at the seams Madness fills Gives readers chills Test , 1 , 2 , 3 , IIII It's free to get to III The score is testing U II This game we all have 1 Smiles DWD
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neithern guru

16 years 3 months ago

BRAVO ON UR TEST

A TEST IS....... A TEST IS NOT JUST WORDS WORDS SET TO ENGAGE WORDS SET TO MELT THE HEART IM IMPRESSED WITH WHAT YOU WROTE SO A JOB WELL DONE!!!!!
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RainQueen

16 years 11 months ago

Greetings everyone, I am new

Greetings everyone, I am new here and I must say I am lookin forward to very insightful, wonderful, informing, artistic and enlightening conversations on this space. To each and every poet Imma come aross, I just wanna say "Grow" and in order to do that we need to learn to share and take feedback without being defensive. Love and Light
mona

mona

16 years 11 months ago

test

Hello, I'm new in this club ...........good test Iwish if I can read more..poems
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orgami

16 years 11 months ago

tesla

test limitless boundaries of alternating wonder the current of which we hum like wires like birds spoken too by God on their winds black shadow racing like quick thoughts test the capacity and understand the test
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 11 months ago

Just my mind.

Orgami. I wonder as you place your face a little to far from the shield you choose. I thought you were a sniper and by chance you will always be. Yet you know as well as I if you even offer a increment of your body to light you would simply be dead. Nothing more and nothing less. Do me a favor if you are to hide stay safe and never show even half of your face. Steven A. Kacer
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 11 months ago

TEST

#1. The test. #2. Place three. #3. Never forget me. Steven A. Kacer
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RichardLynn

16 years 11 months ago

Where AM I?

I knew that you were new, until I turned and saw your shoe So worn, so torn, you've walked so far and then I saw your broken car There was no gas ,the tires were bald so I just got a taxi called When it arrived he ask for change, I said oh no I'll stay the same. Just take me to that Louis place to be ordained or maybe co-ordinated! It's 5:30 AM in Greenville and I must go in search of my mind...later
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hettie41hotmail

16 years 10 months ago

message

My name is Hettie. Iam happy to share my poems with you and to read your poems to.
believe

believe

16 years 10 months ago

a thought

Truth is like a sword Talk is the shield Regret the armor Feelings lie within
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 10 months ago

Test 1 then the next. Test the third without regret

Louis. I find a test is to be just that of a question answerd in the wind. So test me and you will find a sharp mind. Yet I will leave my weapons at home. As a test can take from a man his very soul. So if you wish I place two pawns to the front of your door. You won't see them as they are well to hide from men. Yet now the test is to play in your yard as a black bag blows by a tree for some reason drops many leaves and then a cat yells as a dog is to bark. The test my friend is simple did hell or a soldier just walk by. Steven A. Kacer
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 7 months ago

The test

I took a test last week. I think I passed as I'm to stand and speak. I was kind to most yet lost it a few times along the way. So yes a test as I looked to a ladies eyes and said only this. " So many people in such a rush to get just one place ahead of the next". That was her test and yes she took the bait. I passed that test yet the first was mine I think. A fool in a suit played in my gray as he was not happy with my boots and the way I packed my gear. He just took cuts in line and wen't ahead of me. wait I did pass the test I did not kick his ignornant little arse clean out of his little gay slip on shoes. Ok so a test is more than what is placed just to the eyes you keep in your head. Steven A. Kacer
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adjei agyei-baah

16 years 7 months ago

New with news

Hi my fellow creative writers,I am new on this site and would like to share with you what nature has thought me.i have learnt a lot from the works already mounted.They are just beautiful and thoughtful and has forever keep me going.Lets continue to flow ideas from the brain through to the hand.Posterity will forever be grateful.
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magics02

16 years 6 months ago

Nice

Welcome to you also as I am fairly new here also. just wanted to say I like what you said on this test page. Welcome aboard, looking forward to your reads. magics02
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Omvi

16 years 6 months ago

Test-taste

Am a poet from the the motherland.where some of your forefathers landed,advocating foreign gods.atleast thats what we thought.until like beasts we got caught and locked and forced to work the fields with no rest and no pay.we're still stressed to this day.they taught us to trust and obey but when we closed our eyes to pray.they took our dads plus our mums and made them chefs and security gaurds.they grabed our lands plus our farms,took most of the precious stones,gems,silver and gold.but it looks like they forgot that we had diamonds in sierra leonne.dont get me wrong.am not a racist.am just a poet pointing out facts that very few have the gats to face. -OMVI
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Omvi

16 years 6 months ago

Test-taste

Am a poet from the the motherland.where some of your forefathers landed,advocating foreign gods.atleast thats what we thought.until like beasts we got caught and locked and forced to work the fields with no rest and no pay.we're still stressed to this day.they taught us to trust and obey but when we closed our eyes to pray.they took our dads plus our mums and made them chefs and security gaurds.they grabed our lands plus our farms,took most of the precious stones,gems,silver and gold.but it looks like they forgot that we had diamonds in sierra leonne.dont get me wrong.am not a racist.am just a poet pointing out facts that very few have the gats to face. -OMVI
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Omvi

16 years 6 months ago

Test-taste

Am a poet from the the motherland.where some of your forefathers landed,advocating foreign gods.atleast thats what we thought.until like beasts we got caught and locked and forced to work the fields with no rest and no pay.we're still stressed to this day.they taught us to trust and obey but when we closed our eyes to pray.they took our dads plus our mums and made them chefs and security gaurds.they grabed our lands plus our farms,took most of the precious stones,gems,silver and gold.but it looks like they forgot that we had diamonds in sierra leonne.dont get me wrong.am not a racist.am just a poet pointing out facts that very few have the gats to face. -OMVI
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poorbear

16 years 5 months ago

hey

its is a wold of thoughts out there, so in not so many words life is what we bring into our self and towards what we create to our self dertimines us
Breakinglogic

Breakinglogic

16 years 5 months ago

A puddle of thoughts and

A puddle of thoughts and bits of writes are scattered about, I'm taking bites. Tasty. On this cutting board of testing treasure, to what do I owe this fine reading pleasure. But it's dark in here for all is gray in that words here aren't celebrated in such the way they should. So in hopes of light and so more lay sight I use my right to nominate this thought string to spotlight.
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 5 months ago

test

If a quiz is quizzical, what does that make a test? T tyrannical E elves S slither T townwards
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flowing reed

16 years 5 months ago

test

Hello to everyone! I am new here, about a week-old and would want to stay on until I get bored. Honestly I am impressed by many poets' works. They have inspired me to write better. At same time I am also a little amazed by some crazy writing. I think they are ok, they spice up the serious stuff. Test. To pass the test or retest the test till you are sick of the test like the driving test.
arja

arja

16 years 5 months ago

Test

Hope here is a good place to start...
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jennyroma

16 years 3 months ago

wow

hi it seems i am lost in wonderland am i
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 3 months ago

test

Tranquility Empowerment Supernatural Transcendence Ian
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Bernard Shaw

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks and an intro.

bernard shaw May I say a few words of thanks for the warm welcome to this poetry forum. I am no newcomer to poetry, I have been writing on and off for many years. My poetry ranges from Love through to War poetry. Many of my poems were written for the children that my Wife and I could not have. When we were young the medical world was not so far advanced as it is today.I welcome all kinds of critic and look forward to reading any poem that one or the other of you may rewrite. It would be interesting to see how others see through my eyes so to speak. Thank you for your patience, May writers ink flow plentiful through those biro's, pencils,pens or computers. Bern
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ms.B12

16 years 2 months ago

R.C.Y.V EXACTLY the way im

R.C.Y.V EXACTLY the way im feeling now.im new new and new tOthe computer,ha ha yes ive been living in the stone ages. i use to write on paper with pen or pencil.i had the upper hand there , now look at me now afraid of this scary eyes with alphabets on them.reminds me of the runes way back then when Moses had a beard. wish you all the best friend watch my space too. signing off.(ms.B12}
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Sirbestian Nzula

16 years 1 month ago

Moved by the Holy Spirit

Moved by the Holy Spirit Once you are moved by the Holy Spirit Don’t even try to look back Once you are moved by the Holy Spirit Peace and prosperity you will never lack The Holy Spirit is alive in you You must allow it To help you to stay true You will become meek I feel the spirit in my belly It is burning with kindness From the bottom of my belly All I feel is humbleness I feel like washing a homeless persons feet That is what humility can do for you If it is Christ that you seek You are on the road that is true Every time you speak It will be holy Peace you have to seek You will never be lonely Every word you write Will inspire your readers The liar you have to fight If you want to be a leader When you walk It will be with grace Every time you talk You can light up any face Kindness will be part of your soul You will never take any glory Humbleness will take control To God give all the glory People will say, well done brother If you have meekness You will give thanks to our Father The Master of humbleness Once you are moved by the Holy Spirit Your light will shine bright Once you are moved by the Holy Spirit It is the Spirit of Christ with all His might Sirbestian Nzula
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 1 month ago

test

Tread upon this Earth with care Even Angels know not where Silent, sad, hearts broken lie Trampled, shattered, left to die.
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U K Atiyodi

16 years ago

Horizon is the destination.

Horizon is the destination. The Holy spirit rests there. Like a layer of cotton, thoughts float. The spirit of Christ pacifies every one. The wrong is eclipsed for the right to emerge...that is Jesus. Calm and soothing. I like what you have written. Kudos