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Smooth naughty ,and harsh
Cranky!
Stay away from him
But hey yeah
He has good heart
A big one
Naughty naughty
He makes jokes
Moody moody
But nice
He is an artist
extraordinary
drawing smiles
on our face
with sadness too
as a mood changes
The weather does too
Oooooo charming
Boring boring
When he ignores you
To him
angry angry
Most of the time
Have fun
Life is short
kookaburra and min
tickle him
And they say.
“Hey yeah
We are friends
To describe him I say:
The stone named his name
The moon and the sun
got their light from his face
The tears are shame
To draw their way
In the beginning of this friendship
Oh come on and cheer up
our souls are still the same
And can’t be changed
I’m laughing and
it’s so funny
To meet some one
Turns your life upside down
And it’s so nice with their pure beauty
of their pure nature.
Critiques
mona
16 years ago
To him
weirdelf
16 years ago
I’ve been thinking about
mona
16 years ago
I'm the honoured person here when you said
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Mona
mona
16 years ago
Thank youuuu sooooooo much Jane
Dalton
16 years ago
A change of style and pace
mona
16 years ago
Thanks John
raj
16 years ago
Hello Mona
mona
16 years ago
Thanks Thanks for this comment
mantiscepter
16 years ago
S.M&N.
mona
16 years ago
I'm really happy
Lonnie
16 years ago
I believe you pegged Jess properly!
mona
16 years ago
thanks
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Ah I knew this was for Jess!
mona
16 years ago
I can see him there too
hobo
16 years ago
Very nice
mona
16 years ago
Yes he is,look at his comment
Nanoosha
16 years ago
Liky him!!!
mona
16 years ago
Thanks Nani
Lil Z
16 years ago
Wow!
mona
16 years ago
THANKYOUUUU Lil Z
mona
16 years ago
This is an address of two poems has been written for me by my
soulful spirit
16 years ago
Nice one!
mona
16 years ago
Thank you my dear
soulful spirit
16 years ago
You are welcome.
mona
16 years ago
thank you again my dear
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