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Smooth naughty ,and harsh

Cranky!
Stay away from him
But hey yeah
He has good heart
A big one

Naughty naughty
He makes jokes
Moody moody
But nice
He is an artist
extraordinary
drawing smiles
on our face
with sadness too
as a mood changes
The weather does too
Oooooo charming
Boring boring
When he ignores you
To him
angry angry
Most of the time
Have fun
Life is short

 

kookaburra and min
tickle him
And they say.
“Hey yeah
We are friends
To describe him I say:
The stone named his name
The moon and the sun
got their light from his face
The tears are shame
To draw their way

 

In the beginning of this friendship
Oh come on and cheer up
our souls are still the same
And can’t be changed
I’m laughing and
it’s so funny
To meet some one
Turns your life upside down
And it’s so nice with their pure beauty
of their pure nature.

— mona, Jul 11, 2010

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Country/Region: LBY

Favorite Poets: Some Arab poets, my love once, .....Dear friends too

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mona

mona

15 years 11 months ago

To him

I challenge you to write similar poem,,,,(wink)> I'm trying to draw smiles with this poem ,so have fun! Thank you Seren for your suggestions . Mona
weirdelf

weirdelf

15 years 11 months ago

I’ve been thinking about

I’ve been thinking about your poem all day and coming back to read it again. I am so deeply touched. I know I have said that you can never really know someone or be their friend online. Your poem humbles me and proves me wrong. Only a true friend could see me clearly and know me deeply as you have shown you do. I don't know if I can do honour to this one by responding to your challenge. Although you might even say I have already tried in my poem "To Her". And I may be prejudiced here but I also genuinely believe it is bloody good poetry. It trips along with an insouciant cadence that doesn't shy away from harsher truths. Many thanks my dear friend, Jess
mona

mona

15 years 11 months ago

I'm the honoured person here when you said

As a guide of mine I'm the honoured person here when you said that you are so deeply touched and also genuinely believe it is bloody good poetry. It trips along with an insouciant cadence that doesn’t shy away from harsher truths. And about your poem "To Her",its not counted,,come on my friend I'm challenging you her, and encouraging you to write new poem,all your friends at this website waiting new poem from you. you can use an OLD conversation (you know it). I'm really happy that you like it Mona
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Mona

I was happy to help huni ... Jess is a friend ... and you see him with clarity love and hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
R

raj

15 years 11 months ago

Hello Mona

Hola Hola I loved this one Crazy Crazy but full on fun Hurrah Hurrah for this write Bravo Bravo for this style raj (sublime_ocean)
M

mantiscepter

15 years 11 months ago

S.M&N.

Great write mona, I enjoyed this one alot, I don't know Jess, but I've heard Seren talk about him many times. and that's the name of that tune. so have a good day, and see ya soon. Love John
mona

mona

15 years 11 months ago

I'm really happy

I'm really happy to introduce my friend in this way ,because many people should not get miss understand him. THANK YOU JOHN To meet him try chat room. Mona
L

Lonnie

15 years 11 months ago

I believe you pegged Jess properly!

This poem shows how much you appreciate your friend, by showing not only his attributes, but also his flaws, as any friend would! I wouldn't change a thing about this, Mona! Very well done!
SH

shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

Ah I knew this was for Jess!

Wonderful poem mona , and a fantastic observation of another true poet, its so wonderful when we can write about eachother, as i feel its lovely to show your appreciation to your friends on site! I see Jess is over the moon with it! much love shirl....... shirley harrison
hobo

hobo

15 years 11 months ago

Very nice

This is very good work my friend, this person must be quite the person to have as a friend. I bet he loves this poem *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*
N

Nanoosha

15 years 10 months ago

Liky him!!!

Sweety...I really liked your style in this poem...so impressive appreaciating a freiedd with a poem... with love Nanoosha
mona

mona

15 years 10 months ago

Thanks Nani

I'm soooooooooooooooo much happy to see you here FINALLLLLLLLLYYYYY. And yes,,,Jess is my best friend. Mona
LZ

Lil Z

15 years 10 months ago

Wow!

I would be honored if my best friend wrote me a poem like this! Excellent write! Sincerely, Lil Z
mona

mona

15 years 10 months ago

THANKYOUUUU Lil Z

This poem for my best friend .I did not met him before but I wish if I can do one day Mona
SS

soulful spirit

15 years 10 months ago

Nice one!

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood... T.S Eliot Nice writing, the receiver of the dedication must be fluttered, it's heartfelt and flowing smoothly, nice to catch a good poetess from our sweet home :)
mona

mona

15 years 10 months ago

Thank you my dear

I'm glade that you liked my work and I'm soooooooooooooooooo happy to meet some one from my county(our sweet home). the poem as I've said before .its for my dear friend Jess. just check the first comment ,its his comment and ,,,yes he is so happy. Mona
SS

soulful spirit

15 years 10 months ago

You are welcome.

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood... T.S Eliot I'm glad too sweetheart, it's disappointing that very few libyan write in English, poetry and prose, I was part of another poetry community for almost two years, recently I left it and just now remembered that I have an account here. For further communication Feel free to message me if you are interested. Salma
mona

mona

15 years 10 months ago

thank you again my dear

and if you are interested read this poem,its one poem written by my dearfriend Jess:http://www.neopoet.com/node/39917 Mona