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Smooth naughty ,and harsh
Cranky!
Stay away from him
But hey yeah
He has good heart
A big one
Naughty naughty
He makes jokes
Moody moody
But nice
He is an artist
extraordinary
drawing smiles
on our face
with sadness too
as a mood changes
The weather does too
Oooooo charming
Boring boring
When he ignores you
To him
angry angry
Most of the time
Have fun
Life is short
kookaburra and min
tickle him
And they say.
“Hey yeah
We are friends
To describe him I say:
The stone named his name
The moon and the sun
got their light from his face
The tears are shame
To draw their way
In the beginning of this friendship
Oh come on and cheer up
our souls are still the same
And can’t be changed
I’m laughing and
it’s so funny
To meet some one
Turns your life upside down
And it’s so nice with their pure beauty
of their pure nature.
Critiques
mona
15 years 11 months ago
To him
weirdelf
15 years 11 months ago
I’ve been thinking about
mona
15 years 11 months ago
I'm the honoured person here when you said
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Mona
mona
15 years 11 months ago
Thank youuuu sooooooo much Jane
Dalton
15 years 11 months ago
A change of style and pace
mona
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks John
raj
15 years 11 months ago
Hello Mona
mona
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks Thanks for this comment
mantiscepter
15 years 11 months ago
S.M&N.
mona
15 years 11 months ago
I'm really happy
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
I believe you pegged Jess properly!
mona
15 years 11 months ago
thanks
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Ah I knew this was for Jess!
mona
15 years 11 months ago
I can see him there too
hobo
15 years 11 months ago
Very nice
mona
15 years 11 months ago
Yes he is,look at his comment
Nanoosha
15 years 10 months ago
Liky him!!!
mona
15 years 10 months ago
Thanks Nani
Lil Z
15 years 10 months ago
Wow!
mona
15 years 10 months ago
THANKYOUUUU Lil Z
mona
15 years 10 months ago
This is an address of two poems has been written for me by my
soulful spirit
15 years 10 months ago
Nice one!
mona
15 years 10 months ago
Thank you my dear
soulful spirit
15 years 10 months ago
You are welcome.
mona
15 years 10 months ago
thank you again my dear