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mona
mona
May 19, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

love is not a sin

 

Confess,there is no shame
love is not a sin
nobody can hide his feelings
nobody should
its a gift.
your heart melted within your ribs
can’t you feel it?
don’t freeze your emotions,feelings
let it go
express,shout , cry…say it.
and let me know if we are in love or…
  
— mona, May 19, 2010

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Country/Region: LBY

Favorite Poets: Some Arab poets, my love once, .....Dear friends too

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lou

lou

16 years 2 months ago

good

Your welcome it reads better love lou x
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 2 months ago

Oh Mona!

Love that "your heart melted within your ribs"! I too can feel it! Sweet! Bonita j
mona

mona

16 years 2 months ago

yes it is

when we become lovers,and love possess our bodies,minds,...oh,not only your heart will melt but also your body,
chumfin

chumfin

16 years 2 months ago

“ITS NOT A SIN TO LOVE,

"ITS NOT A SIN TO LOVE, BUT A SIN NOT TO LOVE". Felix Joseph mona your poem was very good , i like tyhe title you chose. grteat job chumfin.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

Love is like a rose,

Love is like a rose, opening... ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta
mona

mona

16 years 2 months ago

love is like a rose, opening

unless with a mute,but he is not,and he is ,and he is not. its a game.....between love,life, destiny and us.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

I’ve come to the absolute

I've come to the absolute conclusion that there is only love. Only humans can possibly consider and create something other than. The rest of the universe just abides in it without fanfare, without question. ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

Glad to be of service

that's what I'm here for, your dear friend, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroying the mind." [Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged]
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Damo

16 years 2 months ago

Hear, Hear!

I agree with Bonita - the line: 'your heart melted within your ribs' ...is a beauty!! I love the simple truth of your words.
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

if love was

...... a sin i wish to head the queue of the WORLDS SINNERS AS MY NAME IS LOVED AND LOVELY here READ ME AT www.triond.com lovelyhoney there
mona

mona

16 years ago

The only thing I'm sure about it is

there is no pure feeling in the world considered as a sin. complicated people who consider such feelings should be bounded by many rules ,they are the sin itself. and keep your queue away from my ears ,,,(smile) Mona
loved

loved

16 years ago

LOVE IS NOT A SIN...never can be

THEN ITS A SIN NOT TO ACKNOWLEDGE GOOD WISHES AND NOW YOU MAY LIKE TO DEFINE WHAT SIN IS PLEASE BE SURE THE GIFT OF DIVINE IS GRANTED TO FEW SINNERS OF LOVE LIKE ME AND YOU WHAT IS SIN MAY I ASK LOVE IS NOT FOR SURE YOU MUST REMOVE YOUR MASK IF AGAIN I ASK WHAT IS SIN AND WHAT IS LOVE PREPARE YOUR HOME TASK NEVER SAY LOVE IS SIN FOR ITS NOT SINNERS DON'T KNOW WHAT IS SIN AFTER ALL LOVE SURELY IS NOT IS NOT IS NOT
mona

mona

16 years ago

IT IS NOT A SIN

And it will never be. Let me say what I said in other words:The siner ,who thinks LOVE is a sin. MONA
Professor Purple

Professor Purple

16 years ago

So true!

Each line deserves to be read slowly, they're so powerful. I also like Chumfin' quote a lot. Just one suggestion: "nobody" could be written in one word. Antoine
chumfin

chumfin

16 years ago

dear professor, i felt like

dear professor, i felt like a student who had made his professor proud of him, this is when you acknowledged my modest quote , thank sir. its a great honor to my person. chumfin
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shirley harrison

16 years ago

This is beautiful

Dear Mona, your poem is delighful and nobody should hide the feelings of love! you capture the feelings wondefully in this write! much love shirley harrison
mona

mona

16 years ago

Its a different culture

Its a different culture ,where men hiding their feelings for long time before they make their first step. This is a scream of women from that culture.The good thing this is changing. THANKS Mona
faithmairee

faithmairee

16 years ago

Love Is Meant To Be Expressed

Very nicely done, Mona. You have spoken the truth and done so beautifully. I really like this one. Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

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