doorman

Member since August 5, 2009

Member for 16 years, 10 months

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I assume (edit)

Posted Oct 28, 2010 · 13 lines · 7 critiques

A tip with greens and tangerines
attach to some large thing beyond
the frame's geometry, for granted
and on blue

Mathematical? Not like the hour
I look away from what is crumpled,
and see nothing

And I assume

the garden chairs still lie about
Crickets in what I thought was
grass,- (their number troubles
me), but one

Beneath the cotton parasol

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15 years of membership
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10 years of membership
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5 years of membership
October 2010
29 Fri

Received a critique
on I assume (edit) from @Victorclaude
""Not like the hour I look away from what is crumpled, and see nothing" Something about these that just allows one's mind to wander past limits of where it has been before, or thinks boundaries were limits, when there ar…"
29 Fri

Received a critique
on I assume (edit) from @DawningDaytripper
"Some interesting contradictions that draw my attention Doorman. Good read, Julie D.D."
28 Thu

Posted a poem
I assume (edit)
"A tip with greens and tangerines"
Open thread 13 lines
August 2010
04 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2010
15 Tue

Received a critique
on I assume from @Nordic cloud
"Ann of Norway "Long time no see" Livet kan vaere travelt ikke sant? Man er bare ett menneske, og holder pa med sa mange her!!!! Thank you and love from Ann."
May 2010
03 Mon

Posted a poem
I assume
"A tip with greens and tangerines  attach to some large thing beyond"
Open thread 16 lines
April 2010
08 Thu

Posted a poem
Colony holiday
"Hear the murmur of our minds held back by  messy embarrassment, the inner workings "
Open thread 11 lines
August 2009
26 Wed

Most-discussed work
Mercury

30 critiques to date.
15 Sat

Highest posting month
August 2009 — 12 poems
07 Fri

First critique offered
on "BONFIRE OF SORROWS" by @Bonitaj
05 Wed

First publication
Air Letter
04 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.