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doorman
doorman
Mar 11, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The impossible course of action

What a delicate thing the 

Jagged edge of this knife is, 

To choose between one side, 

or another: The uneven fall of some

Leaves,- rush off on cool winds,

Or sink to that warmth, a little 

Too soon, but just in time

For lunch.


— doorman, Mar 11, 2010

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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

You know I just love your writing

Your a smooth casanova writer thats what I name you. Everytime I read somethingn of yours it hits me heart. Just lovely Love Magics02 xoxxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
doorman

doorman

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Mona

Thanks for reading. I'm quite fond of this little write myself, so it's a pleasure to hear it kept your heart pumping. Very busy these days and try to write in the in betweens, but I'll check up on your stuff as soon I can. Yours, Espen.
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 2 months ago

Ah Espen

There you go with "the jaggered edge" of your romantic reasoning, getting all the ladies to swoon again... :) Clever, little write. A delicate morsel! CHeers Bonita j