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Mar 24, 2010
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For reasons
Pitch tar as the sea, primitive foam
labours in on this chosen beach
Favoured not for us, but for reasons
that only seem, and not once revealed
We make prints, drop towels, find shells,
thus you'll only see me,- never the depth
of water and salt, the boiling deep, a
mold that fits the two of eyes you hold
Look down, my dear, to where we should
belong.
— doorman, Mar 24, 2010
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doorman
16 years 2 months ago
Glad you enjoyed the write,
Seren
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