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U K Atiyodi
Member since October 28, 2010
Member for 15 years, 7 months
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Fertility
Hectic search in the mind's forest,
Dicker hearts, yea, heart for heart.
Two or three immutable minds appeared,
Smiles in cheek but gloom in heart,
The reluctant hearts repel, Oh, repel!
A taboo to the dense forest, yet he moved
He saw wonderful beasts, terrible and good,
Now he lost his way, he wanders in the dense wood,
He began to write poems flowing from the heart,
Then he was hungry to drink the intoxicants,
The juice of some drug-plants inspired him,
Gulped a mouthful of fantastic dreams,
Be no blob,I want thee in my heart, the intoxicant
Made him write and write to get the Nobel.
He some how escaped from dense thoughts
He became great with his wonderful ideas.
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- July 2011
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- December 2010
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- October 2010
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28 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- July 2010
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18 Sun
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16 FriReceived a critique
on Stains of blood from @Candlewitch
"Great language use, I had to use the dictionary and learn something new today :) favorite lines: These people were elected to rule us. Law breakers rule us, Teach us to obey law! That is democracy…. Always, Cat" -
16 FriReceived a critique
on Fire flames from @Candlewitch
"I think the last few lines really sum it up. They also happen to be my favorites: A pregnant cloud of agony drips, Pours then to cool a turbulent heart, Wishes withered, the soul lies in fire flames, The fire of pessimi…" -
16 Fri
- May 2010
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31 Mon
- February 2010
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15 MonHighest posting month
February 2010 — 19 poems
- January 2010
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06 WedFirst critique offered
on "coffee cup" by @Orphani
- December 2009
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26 SatFirst publication
Again a crow
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