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Dec 26, 2009
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Again a crow
Poets have sung, the crow listened,
Ages to come, crows are heroes,
Riddles and legends and stories,
Amity, the watch word, a bond lives,
Crows our forefathers, a rebirth,
They mythologically live as crows,
Men feed them to appease the spirits
Past generations live as crows
A solitary man, invalid, hapless,
Watches a crow near and dear,
She chats at my door listen her,
I talk and feed him, joyful days,
He may be my grandpa, erudite,
Teaching tenets from religions,
An unknown bond jointly binds,
A strange rapport, worthy lessons,
I know why a crow is a hero,
Poets, philosophers all crows.
A visiting crow tells tales,
Tones differ,meanings confuse,
"Hunger haunts you it does!"
I throw a hungry bread piece,
It landed with flapped wings,
Snatched perched on a branch,
'Caw, caw' a semiotic challenge,
Here comes the mate, they kiss,
Piece by piece the bread inserted
In the open mouth. Relish.
A societal gesture, gentle nice
A lesson civilized me at once,
They ardently cleanses the premises,
Willing service of all greatness,
A friendship born in earnest,
We are friends now you know!
Ages to come, crows are heroes,
Riddles and legends and stories,
Amity, the watch word, a bond lives,
Crows our forefathers, a rebirth,
They mythologically live as crows,
Men feed them to appease the spirits
Past generations live as crows
A solitary man, invalid, hapless,
Watches a crow near and dear,
She chats at my door listen her,
I talk and feed him, joyful days,
He may be my grandpa, erudite,
Teaching tenets from religions,
An unknown bond jointly binds,
A strange rapport, worthy lessons,
I know why a crow is a hero,
Poets, philosophers all crows.
A visiting crow tells tales,
Tones differ,meanings confuse,
"Hunger haunts you it does!"
I throw a hungry bread piece,
It landed with flapped wings,
Snatched perched on a branch,
'Caw, caw' a semiotic challenge,
Here comes the mate, they kiss,
Piece by piece the bread inserted
In the open mouth. Relish.
A societal gesture, gentle nice
A lesson civilized me at once,
They ardently cleanses the premises,
Willing service of all greatness,
A friendship born in earnest,
We are friends now you know!
— U K Atiyodi, Dec 26, 2009
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 5 months ago
Love this treatise on crows.
Ravenshakti
16 years 5 months ago
Applause and a Bow...
Orphani
16 years 5 months ago
A poets eyes and other
U K Atiyodi
16 years 5 months ago
Again a crow (Poem)