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Jul 18, 2010
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Aggressive
Words are aggro today, aflame with lightning,
My chilled out mind cannot embrace words soothing,
Funky musical words evade only thunder and blitzkrieg
Denying my very existence as a pleasant writer, a poet!
Brahman's throat burst with a loud OM< OM
The dancer's feet clink, impatient to hear words,
The forest's elegance await bamboo music,
Winds whistle, leaves sing, and the wild lullaby,
Only the poet searches for suitable words in vain,
Nature's cracking performance allure the minds,
And inspire wild animals to bonk and enjoy
What wrong have I done to possess a heart crabby,
Clogged! My thunder sound is cankered fully corroded
Gruffness is my music, stiff is my tongue, bosh!
Not Saraswathi but Kali starts the dance macabre,
My tongue bleeds, mouth, nose, and my heart too
An amorak like me cannot possess life's poesy
Hen's teeth cannot chew and enjoy what she eats,
Let me start again, I cannot be banjaxed
A fight for existence, sustenance and life.
Buds, open forthwith, fragrance come with breeze,
Drizzle, cool my head, birds, sing a lullaby!
Brahman's throat burst with a loud OM, OM
Saraswathi, embrace me, enliven my tongue,
I seek education, I seek music, I seek godly art!
Words, don't be aggro, come in plethora,
Relieve me of the agony, let me float, float...
My chilled out mind cannot embrace words soothing,
Funky musical words evade only thunder and blitzkrieg
Denying my very existence as a pleasant writer, a poet!
Brahman's throat burst with a loud OM< OM
The dancer's feet clink, impatient to hear words,
The forest's elegance await bamboo music,
Winds whistle, leaves sing, and the wild lullaby,
Only the poet searches for suitable words in vain,
Nature's cracking performance allure the minds,
And inspire wild animals to bonk and enjoy
What wrong have I done to possess a heart crabby,
Clogged! My thunder sound is cankered fully corroded
Gruffness is my music, stiff is my tongue, bosh!
Not Saraswathi but Kali starts the dance macabre,
My tongue bleeds, mouth, nose, and my heart too
An amorak like me cannot possess life's poesy
Hen's teeth cannot chew and enjoy what she eats,
Let me start again, I cannot be banjaxed
A fight for existence, sustenance and life.
Buds, open forthwith, fragrance come with breeze,
Drizzle, cool my head, birds, sing a lullaby!
Brahman's throat burst with a loud OM, OM
Saraswathi, embrace me, enliven my tongue,
I seek education, I seek music, I seek godly art!
Words, don't be aggro, come in plethora,
Relieve me of the agony, let me float, float...
— U K Atiyodi, Jul 18, 2010
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