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Mar 23, 2010
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Floating
To float and catch the cloud
He took it through the nose.
Colourless clouds did evade,
Yet the decision was to chase.
A freaker near the dustbin
Taught him to breathe in.
Here was the birth of a poet,
A very rare envious stylist.
A modernist and a floating post-modernist.
A tongue too long beats the drum.
Appears multicoloured vision of genius.
Rainbow colours converge, what do I see?
Purity charms an unblemished smile.
Dum is loud, dum is silent
Dome is murmur. Dum it!
Flashes light in the dark corner of my brain,
A grandstand play. One step up and fall.
To the air like a bee, a wicked sucker.
Soft air,cool air. Fragrance spread,
Epode and Strophe. Where am I God?
Catch me, catch me. I float in heaven.
Earth is away. Rapture blossoms.
He took it through the nose.
Colourless clouds did evade,
Yet the decision was to chase.
A freaker near the dustbin
Taught him to breathe in.
Here was the birth of a poet,
A very rare envious stylist.
A modernist and a floating post-modernist.
A tongue too long beats the drum.
Appears multicoloured vision of genius.
Rainbow colours converge, what do I see?
Purity charms an unblemished smile.
Dum is loud, dum is silent
Dome is murmur. Dum it!
Flashes light in the dark corner of my brain,
A grandstand play. One step up and fall.
To the air like a bee, a wicked sucker.
Soft air,cool air. Fragrance spread,
Epode and Strophe. Where am I God?
Catch me, catch me. I float in heaven.
Earth is away. Rapture blossoms.
— U K Atiyodi, Mar 23, 2010
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anonymous1
16 years 2 months ago
Good first stanza.