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tbeaudet
Member since October 27, 2007
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Today, I Guess
Today, I Guess
I stood in the shower ’til the water turned cold
Felt like a tough day was about to unfold
On the edge of the bed, I sighed and got dressed
I'm going to really miss someone today, I guess
The pot of coffee I made was a little too strong
I lost count of the scoops and perked it too long
Like a wet, heavy blanket you can't throw aside
The last page of our fairytale story book lied
The bill must've arrived for past sins I must pay
I guess I just really miss someone today
Picked up the newspaper again and again
I’m seeing the words but I don't comprehend
All my thoughts and my focus just seem to digress
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I just really miss someone today, I guess
The sun may be shining but my skies are gray
I want the hot sun to burn these thick clouds away
Like eyes on a portrait, I'm staring so far away
I guess I just really miss someone today
The unscathed proclaim that time heals all wounds
Still I’m haunted by visions from that warm afternoon
Perhaps more time is needed, but nevertheless
i just really miss someone today, I guess
It seems my ship’s docked in Melancholy Bay
I guess I just really miss someone today
My spirits always pick up upon her arrival
Her loving smile is essential for my soul’s survival
Before falling asleep I whisper, “honey I had a bad day“
She says “I know you did darling, I had one yesterday”
We get up every morning with great loss to address
That's what happens when you really miss someone, I guess
The sun may be shining but my skies are gray
I guess I just really miss someone today
tbeaudet’s timeline
- October 2022
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26 WedAnniversary
15 years of membership
- March 2021
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09 TueReceived a critique
on Today, I Guess from @Lavender
"Hello! Direct and profound. Your language is so genuine and sincere. A straightforward and tender poem for a very sad and painful experience. Thank you, Lavender" -
09 Tue
- October 2017
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26 ThuAnniversary
10 years of membership
- June 2015
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17 Wed
- October 2012
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26 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- February 2011
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17 ThuReceived a critique
on Simply from @Kailashana2
"HEY! WELCOME BACK! Your poem could be another version of Lennon's *jealous guy*... sadly.... I could almost hear your whistling. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6lLs2dC9NaE ~A" -
17 Thu
- March 2010
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04 Thu
- October 2008
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26 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2008
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29 Tue
- November 2007
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15 ThuHighest posting month
November 2007 — 7 poems
- October 2007
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28 SunFirst critique offered
on "gardens are for growing gardeners" by @ab
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27 SatFirst publication
Today, I Guess
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26 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am not a poet; I began writing as therapy after the tragic loss of my son. Everything I write is written for song, but I cannot write music, so good or bad, I guess it's poetry.
Location: Boston, USA
Favorite Poets
Patti Smith
Lucinda Williams
John Prine
Bruce Springsteen
Jim Carroll
Bob Dylan
Tom Waites
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