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Aug 03, 2008
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Stubs - poems with angels
After I’ve got a brogue in the top of the head
I aroused my shape – half blood, half smile
and started to search through insanity’s view-finder
the hammer’s handgrip
to hack your ankles with,
not to be able to reach the ground anymore
******************************************
Three hours ago I received a message
from the angels with flutters and vodka bottles,
it seems that there was a party at the Heaven’s gates;
they called me to enjoy them with my presence,
of course with approval from Saint Peter
In Heaven, the serene ones were sleeping
Reached in the middle of the lewd,
angels were dancing with voluptuous women, dressed
in shiny leather fixed on the fannies;
at the tables, the devils were shouting their tequila glasses
waving their tails underneath the seats
Hereabout the taproom, the guardian angel...
slightly dizzy, accepted me in the gang –
he ordered for fifty grams and a monkey wrench
Overreached the glass to me and took in his hand the wrench
and punched me
in a stub of wings ...
meaning that he won the wager
***************************************************
Beneath me: the gurney, the hammer and the bottle
of vodka,
the hot asphalt and plumes tracks
I aroused my shape – half blood, half smile
and started to search through insanity’s view-finder
the hammer’s handgrip
to hack your ankles with,
not to be able to reach the ground anymore
******************************************
Three hours ago I received a message
from the angels with flutters and vodka bottles,
it seems that there was a party at the Heaven’s gates;
they called me to enjoy them with my presence,
of course with approval from Saint Peter
In Heaven, the serene ones were sleeping
Reached in the middle of the lewd,
angels were dancing with voluptuous women, dressed
in shiny leather fixed on the fannies;
at the tables, the devils were shouting their tequila glasses
waving their tails underneath the seats
Hereabout the taproom, the guardian angel...
slightly dizzy, accepted me in the gang –
he ordered for fifty grams and a monkey wrench
Overreached the glass to me and took in his hand the wrench
and punched me
in a stub of wings ...
meaning that he won the wager
***************************************************
Beneath me: the gurney, the hammer and the bottle
of vodka,
the hot asphalt and plumes tracks
Comments
Atticus
17 years 9 months ago
bravo!
Marius Surleac
17 years 9 months ago
Hi Atticus!Thank you for the
infinite_dwarf
17 years 9 months ago
Marius!
Marius Surleac
17 years 9 months ago
Hi Jess!I am back after a
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
Can't comment on this now,
Marius Surleac
17 years 9 months ago
Lol Jess!No problem, I will
barbsdad2003
17 years 9 months ago
Beautifully crafted ...
Marius Surleac
17 years 9 months ago
Danke!
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
Ahh, didn't need the reminder,
Marius Surleac
17 years 9 months ago
Hi Jess,glad that you liked