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Posted Feb 4, 2015 · 1 lines · 3 critiques

Why who is she compared to who am i . Why is need more than a manhood made from pride . I want to keep every definition that my love should provide. But I have found out that definition's are a fault of compromised

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February 2024
12 Mon

Anniversary
15 years of membership
February 2019
12 Tue

Anniversary
10 years of membership
February 2015
06 Fri

Received a critique
on why from @judyanne
"compromise (without the 'ed') A strong write - but I do think it would be more powerful if written in a more standard poetic form... Why Who is she compared to who I am Why is need more than a manhood made from pride I…"
06 Fri

Received a critique
on why from @Sparrow
"Where have you been, matters not you are back again great to see you and I look forward to more of your poetry again. You seemed to leave when your poetry was beginning to have an effect on others, hope you stay this ti…"
05 Thu

Received a critique
on why from @emogothgirl
"the way you write is really intriguing, because i want to pull it apart and put it back together with some kind of form, but at the same time i just don't KNOW if you should. i'm very confused. consider that a good thin…"
04 Wed

Posted a poem
why
"Why who is she compared to who am i . Why is need more than a manhood made from pride . I want to keep every definition that my love should provide. But I have found out that definition's are a fault of compromised"
Open thread 1 lines
04 Wed

Received a critique
on Press & Brenda from @emogothgirl
"I really like this. My only suggestion is to break up the lines a little more, give it some good flow to match the super content. Straightforward, straight from the heart. Absolutely lovely. Mag"
January 2015
30 Fri

Received a critique
on Press & Brenda from @weirdelf
"https://soundcloud.com/user536630132/press-brenda-submitted-by Honest and genuine, Press"
30 Fri

Posted a poem
Press & Brenda
"I found my true love thru the darkness of my life her touch her kiss was the reason to for fill the love that was right"
Open thread 4 lines
February 2014
12 Wed

Anniversary
5 years of membership
July 2013
30 Tue

Received a critique
on Time has age me from @lonlyhrtsclub13
"Long time no see (it's me hardcorechick28). Glad to see you are back and writing again. Your poem was short but made perfect sense. It seems like we change with every piece we write and as time goes on, our writing chan…"
29 Mon

Received a critique
on Time has age me from @Ian.T
"Jess has found all the small grammatical things, so all I have to do is comment on the theme, great, great, piece and no wasted words, Yours Ian.T PS:- Haven't forgotten you lol."
28 Sun

Received a critique
on Time has age me from @weirdelf
"Great to see you, it's been a while. A very effective and rather poignant poem. I think it would be improved by using more correct (traditional?) grammar. Time has age me [aged] Time has age me since paper was put to pe…"
28 Sun

Posted a poem
Time has age me
"Time has age me since paper was put to pen"
Open thread 4 lines
October 2012
07 Sun

New follower
@Seren
February 2012
03 Fri

Posted a poem
Emptiness is a door to hope
"Emptiness is a door to hope Belief is a mentality in the shrugged to cope."
Open thread 3 lines
November 2011
30 Wed

New follower
@Barbara Writes
28 Mon

New follower
@docmaverick
July 2011
15 Fri

Posted a poem
BLADE OF GRASS
"BLADE OF GRASS"
Open thread 9 lines
15 Fri

Posted a poem
EACH CORNER IS A TURN OF A TURN
"EACH CORNER IS A TURN OF A TURN"
Open thread 18 lines
13 Wed

Posted a poem
THE BITER BLENDED SWEET
"THE BITER BLENDED SWEET"
Open thread 33 lines
12 Tue

Posted a poem
TO BE A MOUNTAIN
"TO BE A MOUNTAIN"
Open thread 17 lines
12 Tue

Posted a poem
life in grays and black!
"In the solitude of blindness, you have found resolve. Choosing to see life in grays and black!"
Open thread 6 lines
April 2011
29 Fri

Critiqued
"Subterfuge for Loyalty?" by @Tonya
"Mom we cannot loose are mentality our foundation when we try to figure out the balance of unconditional love there will never be a balance too unconditional love. There will always be betrayal even in the smallest ways…"
29 Fri

Critiqued
"My Political Peace" by @readwritelive
"I kind of like U R flow I Like the repetitive play on words and sounds . I think in sends a message that is Constance"
29 Fri

Posted a poem
A poem to my son
"I was a king"
Open thread 16 lines
March 2011
16 Wed

Posted a poem
CONDEMN
"CONDEMN"
Open thread 42 lines
15 Tue

Posted a poem
A metaphorical place ,my ZOO
"A metaphorical place ,my ZOO"
Open thread 38 lines
May 2010
30 Sun

Critiqued
"Silent screams for respect: hear her pain " by @Seren
"I would have liked to seen the word why used more in this poem.Why dose a man or woman not care ,what are we missing. I would like to know your poetry behind this you use words like parasite who are these people Now who…"
March 2010
31 Wed

Critiqued
"Voiceless" by @poet1
"I am glad to see and read your poems . Maybe I can follow your flow because we structure our content in a similar way . How we start a thought in a poem. The way we set the flow with the end and consequences made appare…"
19 Fri

Critiqued
"no lipstick, no strawberry fields" by @whitetea
"I will have to say that your opening lines were captivating. Only a lady poet could have structured those words in that way, that a man would have to read farther. Now I think there is so much raw material in this poem…"
10 Wed

Posting milestone
100 poems posted
07 Sun

Critiqued
"Universal Wonder" by @evie.haywood
"I will have to say in this poem . The first words [ Why is it that the sun,Though thought to hold pleasure and beauty, Moves in the path of a frown?].This took me to new places, this part was outstanding. But then U los…"
February 2010
12 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
December 2009
01 Tue

Critiqued
"Felling an Empire" by @Seren
"I have been in & out 4 a while with my poetry. I don't know if this is the next stage of my elocution in poetry . But I will say this . I see very clearly , how you have changed . What I see now JC in your poetry is z p…"
November 2009
22 Sun

Critiqued
"Silent Peace(from chat)" by @Rett
"Dad I must say that this poem written by my dad surprises me . And maybe I am not getting it's core . But it's pretty obvious to me . That some one will get a ass kicking by you. Now U know U didn't rise the poetry in m…"
June 2009
15 Mon

Highest posting month
June 2009 — 15 poems
14 Sun

Most-discussed work
Ian. T, T is for teacher

10 critiques to date.
February 2009
14 Sat

First critique offered
on "UNLESS LIKE A CHILD" by @adom paul
13 Fri

First publication
A ship made with your sails
12 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.