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HONESTY IS THE SHARPEST BLADE OF ADVICE
HONESTY IS THE SHARPEST BLADE OF ADVICE
Will honesty be complicated by?
Fragile intricate convoluted words of meaning
Equations of right and wrong
Can simplified by actions of truth
However, honesty can cut like a knife
Your words maybe honest
But also the sharpest blade of advice
Nevertheless, raw honesty can cut to deep inside
Autonomy, could be broken negotiated
By brutal, honest reasons explanations and replies
Solvency maybe severed, by a simple cut of advice
This decision is delicate is honesty a strength or
Alternatively, words edited sugar coated for a compromised
Specially if love and history has given its right
To say words out of love with the sharpest blade of advice
So do not spare them because they cannot handle
These words that cut deep inside
Do not spare them when they attack you
Because you have cross the boundaries were friendship lies
Using a word of betrayal, you are not a friend of mine
Honesty is delicate but strength is beyond a cry
Critiques
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Press
yenti
16 years 1 month ago
Press
press
16 years 1 month ago
Re
press
16 years ago
Ian
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Press great one advice here
press
16 years 1 month ago
My true friend Magics
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Yes poetry is a gift you give to others
press
16 years 1 month ago
Mona
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Amen to that I say