mantiscepter

Member since July 5, 2009

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Forever To Life

Posted Jul 16, 2010 · 7 lines · 7 critiques

A dreamer stops
when their dreams

come true

But a person
with a vision

dreams till their
life is through

July 2024
04 Thu

Anniversary
15 years of membership
July 2019
04 Thu

Anniversary
10 years of membership
July 2014
04 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
May 2012
21 Mon

Received a critique
on A SEED from @judyanne
"this is great wonderful descriptive and subtext the only suggestion for change 'gilded a heart' - i'd make it 'a gilded heart' and i don't think the 'it's' in the last line needs the apostrophe - that makes it 'it is' a…"
20 Sun

Received a critique
on A SEED from @Candlewitch
"A pensive poem to be sure. Very palatable. always, Cat"
19 Sat

Received a critique
on A SEED from @believe
"I like the content of this, it take one on a trip through life, loneliness, and most emotions, Well done"
July 2010
16 Fri

Posted a poem
Forever To Life
"  A dreamer stops"
Open thread 7 lines
13 Tue

Posted a poem
Life Force
"Ah to be"
Open thread 14 lines
12 Mon

Posted a poem
Good Time
"Silent this night"
Open thread 16 lines
04 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2010
06 Sun

Posting milestone
100 poems posted
April 2010
15 Thu

Highest posting month
April 2010 — 22 poems
September 2009
15 Tue

Most-discussed work
Till I've Ended

23 critiques to date.
August 2009
05 Wed

First critique offered
on "Beguiled in Moon Dust " by @Seren
July 2009
05 Sun

First publication
A chant
04 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.