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Apr 16, 2010
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Just Moments
Today I touched
a soft white cloud
that sprayed my face
voices echoed loud
beneath my visions
they had soared to join
spreading a darkness
blocking suns own void
trails would lead us
above these sights
we walked for hours
lead by misty light
beauty abounded
in each turning course
an awe inner feelings
intertwine in a force
then conquered I stood
at the peak of it's reach
staring over these clouds
rising slow ray's had breached
that had fallen from sun
bringing picturesque sights
lasting just moments
filling inner delight
a yell for old times sake
that roared many miles
with the end of this venture
that would make many smile
a soft white cloud
that sprayed my face
voices echoed loud
beneath my visions
they had soared to join
spreading a darkness
blocking suns own void
trails would lead us
above these sights
we walked for hours
lead by misty light
beauty abounded
in each turning course
an awe inner feelings
intertwine in a force
then conquered I stood
at the peak of it's reach
staring over these clouds
rising slow ray's had breached
that had fallen from sun
bringing picturesque sights
lasting just moments
filling inner delight
a yell for old times sake
that roared many miles
with the end of this venture
that would make many smile
— mantiscepter, Apr 16, 2010
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