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Just Moments

 Today I touched 
a soft white cloud
that sprayed my face
voices echoed loud

beneath my visions
they had soared to join 
spreading a darkness
blocking suns own void

trails would lead us
above these sights
we walked for hours
lead by misty light

beauty abounded
in each turning course
an awe inner feelings
intertwine in a force

then conquered I stood
at the peak of it's reach
 staring over these clouds
rising slow ray's had breached

that had fallen from sun
bringing picturesque sights
lasting just moments
filling inner delight

a yell for old times sake
that roared many miles
with the end of this venture
that would make many smile





                                                                                        

— mantiscepter, Apr 16, 2010

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16 years 1 month ago

Dear John

I thought the first few stanza's where a little meloncholy but then the sun comes out in the ending stanza's lovely journey ... I really thought this one had a different feel from your others and I love where you are headed love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x (Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll)