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mantiscepter
Apr 24, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Delicate

 Living in a house of glass 
this touch of mine is cold

keeping out 
the warmth of people

of this life
I used to hold

simple thoughts
are all I keep

alone with dreams
the night I meet
— mantiscepter, Apr 24, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear John

I would love to see this one expanded a little ... I wanted MORE lol ... but a sad write alone with dreams the night I meet loved those lines love and hugs JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
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mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

Delicate

Hi Seren Great write Ann dedicated to you,another person I value greatly. and you know how bad I am at finding my way through the site. so Please if I miss something like your spotlight, last time nudge me, I know I get, No. I am. the worst at learning some, things then when I think I know what I'm doing. I forget again. Must be senior moments..... any way your in my dreams and my prayers always, thanks for your time reading this poem, and your comments. and your write was beautiful, and well deserved spotlight status. so forgive me and till we write again your friend John. P.S. Big Hugs and kisses..