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Apr 20, 2010
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Your Presence Cancels Time
This beauty I feel
from deep within
was given to my care
when first we met
to join these times
pleasures we've shared
I've grown to
understand you
feeling love I once had felt
although the years
seem ageless
through eye's this time does melt
to hide
the many memories
of love my shaded past
I've done for many reasons
still your love
has brought to cast
this sphere
around my being
as a spirit it has climbed
to gather not our past
for your presence
cancels time
a dream you are to many
yet mine
have been fulfilled
as hand in hand
together we walk
surly this is willed
no- one is as lovely
fallen ages cast
your beauty is defined
while soft your hands
do touch me
as hopes do intertwine
at times I
see your eye's smile
your lips turn red as bows
no I can't
explain my feelings when
stars we greet in droves
but I know when were together
you're the beacon of my hope
from deep within
was given to my care
when first we met
to join these times
pleasures we've shared
I've grown to
understand you
feeling love I once had felt
although the years
seem ageless
through eye's this time does melt
to hide
the many memories
of love my shaded past
I've done for many reasons
still your love
has brought to cast
this sphere
around my being
as a spirit it has climbed
to gather not our past
for your presence
cancels time
a dream you are to many
yet mine
have been fulfilled
as hand in hand
together we walk
surly this is willed
no- one is as lovely
fallen ages cast
your beauty is defined
while soft your hands
do touch me
as hopes do intertwine
at times I
see your eye's smile
your lips turn red as bows
no I can't
explain my feelings when
stars we greet in droves
but I know when were together
you're the beacon of my hope
— mantiscepter, Apr 20, 2010
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greeneyes
16 years 1 month ago
Thank God
mantiscepter
16 years 1 month ago
Yours
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear John
mantiscepter
16 years 1 month ago
Superb