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Your Presence Cancels Time

 This beauty I feel 
from deep within
was given to my care

when first we met 
to join these times
 pleasures we've  shared

I've grown to 
understand you
feeling love I once had felt

although the years
seem ageless
through eye's this time does melt

to hide
the many memories
of love my shaded past

I've done for many reasons
still your love 
has brought to cast

this sphere
around my being
as a spirit it has climbed

to gather not our past
for your presence 
cancels time

a dream you are to many
yet mine 
have been fulfilled

as hand in hand
together we walk
surly this is willed

no- one is as lovely
 fallen ages cast
your beauty is defined

while soft your hands 
do touch me
as hopes do intertwine 

at times I
see your eye's smile
your lips turn red as bows

no I can't 
explain my feelings when
stars we greet in droves

but I know when were together
 you're the beacon of my hope








— mantiscepter, Apr 20, 2010

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greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 1 month ago

Thank God

Thank the good Lord you are back! Your poems have been missed. this one was just beautiful. Love, Elizabeth
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mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

Yours

Hello my friend how the heck are ya? have missed you a lot, just a little earlier before I wrote the poem I sent a few words to Lyz, I had not talked to her for a couple weeks. so how are things with you I hope good. i was going to bed two hours ago , but I'm glad I got to say hi I've missed you and yours and I'm glad you liked this poem. anyway love I have to hit the sack so write me and I will try to do the same... lots of love John.
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear John

I think my vocab of superlatives have been used up on you ... so let my ...'sigh' be your accolade love and big hugs JayCee Quote:- It is a thousand times better to have common sense without education than to have education without common sense.---Robert Green Ingersoll
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mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

Superb

I believe thats the right answer. and you are superb. thank you seren for the love. John.