Diamond

With a jewel like glitter
light reflecting bright

the rainbows in
this life we live

like a prism
guide the light

in paths of joy
ways that find

the truths of love
in thoughts our minds

— mantiscepter, Apr 17, 2010

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weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

whe I find a poem that has goen 4 weeks without comment,

I want to to ask you why you think it has. words like glitter rainbow,and briht take away from it. they are one word cliches The sentiment is good but it could bee expressed more originally Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroying the mind." [Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged]

mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

well spoken

Like a conundrum, or an organic melting pot of knowledge, you have swayed my views of the world. your analytical approach has given me, a whole entire respect for ignorance. views as shallow as yours should be kept in the recesses of your knowledge range. if in fact you can call it a range...

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

I have given you positive feedback before,

was just trying to help here, even if my late night spelling was off. The poem had gone 4 weeks without comment, perhaps I should have just asked why you think it so. No offense meant. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroying the mind." [Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged]

mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

Diamond

I'M sorry I was `wrong to comment as I did. Please forgive me...

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