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Hoping

 There's something
in the world I want

what it is
I do not know

I'll search for it
each and every day

will I find it.
who cares I don't....
— mantiscepter, Apr 22, 2010

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Hello

I think you have a very good start, here, to a much better poem. Always, Cat
M

mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

what it is

thanx cat. always good to hear a new voice. this write just was so I left it. so next time I will.... have a good day. John Mantiscepter