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Julie50
Member since March 30, 2012
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Hello young Julie
Dear Julie,
I have alot to say. For you are getting older every day.
You'll have so much fun being young, shall
I tell you what's to come?
You'll have a good life but you will have to fight
for it. There will be challenges this is true
but you will make it through.
There will be many good times and blessings to come. Your fun has just begun.
You're sixty one now, smart and wise.
You've been through some rough times,
but you survived!
So I just wanted to say hi, don't change a
thing. Things always work out when you believe. And all that you've achieved.
So be proud of yourself and be strong
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for the wait for you won't be long.
You'll be here soon where I am and we'll
be together again.
I love you
Julie
Julie50’s timeline
- October 2022
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09 SunReceived a critique
on Hello young Julie from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Looking back on a life well lived, not an easy life, a good life. Many more good years to come. Great poem, good rhyme. Tim" -
09 SunReceived a critique
on Hello young Julie from @Lavender
"Hi, Julie, A tender poem full of optimism and encouragement! Don't know of your intentions, but you may want to actually enter it into the Poem to Your Childhood Self Contest! It certainly fits the subject criteria. Tha…" -
09 Sun
- June 2022
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03 Fri
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03 FriReceived a critique
on Father from @Candlewitch
"your format could be a bit tighter, but your message comes clearly through. one thing for sure is that you loved both your mother and father! it is nice to meet you, Julie! *hugs, Cat" -
02 ThuPosted a poem
Father
"My Father was a good provider he did the best he could. I just wish he had spent more time" - March 2022
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30 WedAnniversary
10 years of membership
- March 2017
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30 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2013
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30 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2012
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30 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- January 2008
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24 ThuCritiqued
"The Promise" by @dbrock
"When I read this it seems to be about a young love,but somehow maybe this love left for awhile and you hoped you would always meet again. Then he passed away and you remembered your love and the promises. And now you wa…" -
24 ThuCritiqued
"Exposure (Tanka)" by @dbrock
"I was just getting into it and it was over. I guess some poems are short but I wanted it to go on. Liked it alot!" - November 2007
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08 ThuReceived a critique
on The Beach of Life from @IKnowNoBox
"I was refering to the amount of pollution in my life beach....real reflective poem I am sorry again for my vague comment. I am in the process of a reclaimation of my beaches shores. Truly I am touched by your poem. In i…" -
07 WedReceived a critique
on The Beach of Life from @IKnowNoBox
"the beach. When the beaches are tainted it is hard to capture the feeling this poem gives the reader in words.I believe I will walk down to the beach tomorrow. I need to feel a bit more proportional. In ink, David" -
07 WedReceived a critique
on The Beach of Life from @mark
"the beach in the sunrise morn' is where I am sworn to think the things and praise for the reach of my spirit for the heavens and the universe to my soul then outward in quotes of love. Thank you Julie, Mark" -
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06 TueCritiqued
"The Treasure Room" by @marcm
"I liked the title that's what caught my attention! You said you had a problem with the end. I think you should put the title at the end! Referring to the Treasure, it would help it all make more sense!Instead of library…" -
06 TueCritiqued
"A Season of Reason (Sonnet)" by @dbrock
"I liked it! I liked the words chosen. I had to read it a few times but I realize in your own words how you were describing a winter season! Nice!" -
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- September 2007
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27 ThuCritiqued
"Ill Be There" by @poetguy05
"I like this poem because the author expresses his love for his wife no matter how old she gets! He'll be there! Also the way it ryhmes! It is a nice poem! Julie" -
24 MonCritiqued
"Michael" by @blueeyed bettyboop
"Nice poem! Nothing I disliked! Just your way of saying what the name means to you! I named one of my sons Michael which means(who is like our God) I didn't name him Michael because I thought he was like god. That's just…" -
19 WedCritiqued
"WHO AM I[in my words from my heart]" by @am i loved
"I heard your cry for help in this poem! And well if it's just a poem then I would have to give it an Oscar!But somehow I feel it's real! Everyone that breathes should feel loved or love from something! Sometimes it does…" -
19 WedCritiqued
"The Wide or the Narrow Road" by @blueeyed bettyboop
"Interesting poem it makes the reader think a moment of choices! And that there are really two roads ones a right road and ones a wrong road? I think we would all like to think we've chosen the right one! Thanks for shar…" -
19 WedFirst critique offered
on "Farewell Letter" by @Alijandra
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19 WedPosted a poem
The Giver
"I want to be a better giver.I want to know that good feeling on the inside when" -
04 TuePosted a poem
So Much of Life to Share
"Will I ever run out of things to say? Not this girl not me,no way." - July 2007
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14 Sat
- June 2007
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11 MonFirst publication
Today
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11 Mon
About Me
Location: USA
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Hello young Julie
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Father
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The Beach of Life
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The Rain
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Our Songs
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The Giver
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So Much of Life to Share
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To Live Free
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Today
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