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dbrock
Nov 20, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Exposure (Tanka)

 

 

naked to the world

as I feel the morning sun

warmly absorb me

while a breeze runs through my hair

like a lovers finger tips
— dbrock, Nov 20, 2007

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Mark

Mark

18 years 6 months ago

A moment of

peaceful calm satisfying scerenity. So Nice...
Julie50

Julie50

18 years 4 months ago

This poem

I was just getting into it and it was over. I guess some poems are short but I wanted it to go on. Liked it alot!
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purplemoondoll

18 years 6 months ago

You took me to

a beautiful place with this poem Donna. Thank you. Nice work. :-) Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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Mizkaja

18 years 6 months ago

Exposure

hot and full all in this tiny space you rocked this one
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 6 months ago

a perfect poem

I adore Japanese simplicity with complexity and attention, you achieve it. cheers, Jess
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orgami

18 years 6 months ago

the tip of touch

this is so pleasant a read that breeze how i adore it
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Ancientone

18 years 6 months ago

Sweetly carressing.....

the mind and soul! Nicely done Tanka, Donna. As I'm in St. Louis today, I shared your morning sun, thanks for sharing! :) Patrick/AO
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rpverlaine

18 years 6 months ago

tanka

very well done, tender yet taut
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dbrock

18 years 6 months ago

Thanks so

Thanks so much! blessings, donna