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am i loved
Aug 16, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

WHO AM I[in my words from my heart]


"who i am in my words"

when i look at my self i don’t see anything inportant.

when i get juged or made fun of, there right, there is bearly anything i like bout myself.in poerty that i love to right, no matter how many time i write my work is no good i just know it. even that i been elected at poerty.com that they want me to go wher ei am in the finals, but still why so i will never win. i even dought i never come a poet or an animal rescure. whe i lokk at myself in the mirror i see nothing at all but something that just should wish it was never thought of. i know omly one fact about me and that only one person really loves me and that person[s] is jesus and god.

who am i i ask over and over again but don’t know. i think i worthless and never should waste jesus and gods time and my parents time of think me to be born. i just i was diffrent not me a whole diffrent person. in school i don’t make friends easy and when i do there they wrong kind of friends,

my name is Amanda Rose Ball but who will remmber that name in me family? i know no one will. even thou i try to do whats best… it seems in the end it wasn’t the best. i always mess up on everything. who am i? who am i? i ask over and over, but don’t know the answer. all i know is that i really don’t like my self, that and everyone around me seems like that they don’t love me that well.

like i said be for in my other thoughts from the heart.

everytime i breath i am so much pain that i can’t express

love and pain is that all i am??

i love all but later turns to pain.

what should i do? i use to be sudical, and now i ain’t

but still what will make a diffrence if i am live or dead?

what it be like? will i be happy? but what pain will i cost my parents and family? but it seems love…. there love… means well to me,

but everyone around me evryone at school, everyone in my life hates me, and my friends i don’t know what they think.

i don’t know what to do, i just know one thing

who am i? JUST WHO AM I????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHO AM I????? JUST WHO AM I????????????

— am i loved, Aug 16, 2007

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Quillsvein1

18 years 9 months ago

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sounds like you're having a difficult time. i will tell though that absolutely no one who walks and breathes has not asked themselves these questions or felt this way. i certainly have, very intensely! courage.
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barbsdad2003

18 years 9 months ago

I think you’ve asked the

I think you've asked the most important question: Who am I? The truth? No one knows who you are. Although in the future you will have choices to make that can lead you to self-discovery. And whatever it is you find I'm almost sure will amaze and delight you. But (there's always a but!) it will still be true that all others will not know who you are. Even those closest to you. It's a fact of life. That is, that no one else can know you like you can. However, it's not for me to tell you that. That finding must be made by you. For you. After that you will have newfound (increased) abilities to laugh and to enjoy and to savor ... and without fear of experiencing those inevitable pains of the truly living. Everything will end, including the pain you now experience. It's not stationary; it's a process. And you're welcome to move through it to another side. Whatever advice you are given (even that from comments you receive on your writings posted at this site) you can reject. In other words, if it doesn't fit, don't wear it. Your choice. And my congratulations on your willingness to share your present experience with us. Yours, Chuck
Julie50

Julie50

18 years 8 months ago

I Listened!

I heard your cry for help in this poem! And well if it's just a poem then I would have to give it an Oscar!But somehow I feel it's real! Everyone that breathes should feel loved or love from something! Sometimes it does feel like only God loves us but if you've ever lost someone in your life you would know what that feels like! An emptiness a loss you can never recover! But with time and love you do heal but your heart will never forget those you lost! So speaking for your loved ones i WOULD THINK THEY WOULD CARE..IF YOU WERE GONE! bUT I CAN'T sPEAK FOR THEM.yOU HAVE TO LEARN TO LOVE YOURSELF AND THINK GOOD THOUGHTS ABOUT YOU! wHATEVER MAKES YOU FEEL GOOD ABOUT YOURSELF! pLEASE DON'T GIVE UP BECAUSE IT'S IN THE CHALLENGE OF THIS LIFE THAT MAKES IT EXCITING! i'VE HAD MY DOWN TIMES TOO! bUT CHEER UP BECAUSE IF YOU KNOW gOD LOVES YOU THAT'S AN IMPORTANT START! sO MAY YOU CONTINUE TO WRITE AND SEE YOUR OWN BEAUTY FROM WITHIN! jULIE